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Cydon


Quick brain! We need to come up with something to put in this short bio box! Any ideas? No? Well... how about now? Auuuugh! That's it? A Charlie Brown scream? Oh come on! You can do better than that!-

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On the outskirts of Appleloosa buried under several feet of earth and sand, Braeburn finds something that will change Equestria. Gratae In Phoenix Project.
Will be rewritten eventually
This is my first story so lets give it a shot.

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 23 )

This is pretty great!
Can't wait for more :pinkiehappy:
By the way, I think you're in the clear on any grammatical errors.

I like this so far and this is GUNNA BE SO AWESOME!:rainbowkiss:

I tried to comment on how awesome all of you are when
:pinkiesmile: Hey will you be my friend
:facehoof: pinkie stop breaking the interdimentional barrier and come home
:pinkiesad2:AWW but I was making so many new friends
:ajsmug: Twi's right sugarcube come on back to ponyville and we can have a party
:pinkiehappy: YAY A PARTY LETS GO GIRLS

1415904 When is the next one coming out?

1419034 Soon, I think I can get it out by the weekend. :twilightsmile:

Not as good as i hope... it would have been alot better had u had not used the translator thing, makes it feel a bit bland

This story..... very interesting. I demand another chapter!

I'am a little curious of how he knows about the wedding. From what i read he hasn't had that explained to him, or was it covered in the, "Watch the first two seasons" thing? I haven't seen those in so long so i figured i forgot.

Agreed! Moustache for you sir!
:moustache:

As much as I'm loving the dawww going on in here, think you can spice it up a little? Maybe it's just me, but I like a lot of action in the stories I read.... This story is amazing though! 10/10!

1865495 This story is taking place a couple of months after the end of season two. The most recent events being the wedding of Shining Armor to Cadence and the Changeling invasion.
1866017 Thank you,:twilightsmile: I aim to entertain and your comments let me know what I'm doing right or wrong. As for action if you mean causing some carnage in the ranks of the Changeling swarm don't worry that's coming. If you mean romantic action well we'll see.
THIS COMMENT NEEDS MORE :moustache:

This is totally a self insert, dude. It's told in first person, the main character is a human who winds up all alone in Equestria with all sorts of nifty gadgets and who instantly wows and befriends all the locals, and he has the SAME NAME AS THE AUTHOR.

I enjor the plot but I think you need more punctuation.

1871657 First person does not make it a self insert nor does the main character being human. Nifty gadgets are a must for someone from the future who worked for the military on a top secret project, and the reason the name is the same is because I'm too lazy to come up with another.

1875290 I'm glad you like it.:pinkiesmile: Could you be a little more specific? Where am I lacking punctuation?

Kill 'em!
Kill 'em all!

KILL ALL THE BUG MUTHA FUCKAS!

This story was fucking amazing! Maybe Cyd meets up with Discord? Just an idea for your sequel.

Best Story iv read for a long time loved keep it up man !:twilightsmile:

Well short but sweet

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