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moonbutters


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Fantastic. Had me on the edge of my seat the whole way through.

Pfft. Nice. :rainbowlaugh:
Always appreciate a feghoot. :derpytongue2:

This was pleasantly funny, but I feel like it was too much buildup for a fic based on a joke.

Still, I enjoyed it.

"Sing us a song, you're a piano Dan. Sing us a song Tonight. Well, we're all in the mood for a Melody, and you've got us feelin' alright."

Ahh, don't you just love piano jokes? I gotta hear that song again--it's been while! :rainbowlaugh:

And so, and so, and so...

I don't know what he was doing in the bathroom with the bird. Not important here.

that can't be good

Well played, moonbutters. Well played.

...okay, for making me read all of that, you get a lifetime's worth of rage, wrath, and hate.

...and a like.

...I don't get it.

I hate you so much.
Good job.

Gotta love a good feghoot.

damn, imma have this stuck in my head all day

Damn talk about a buildup and a twist

With that title, I couldn't help but hear this whole thing in DWK's voice, and ... yeah, this is totally something he'd have done. Maybe with a bit more swearing, but still.

I was listening to Piano Man today and knew you were building up for something really corny, but I didn't put it all together before the punchline.

Also the amount of Dad was pretty high here.

11177019 I'm just happy DWK is alright and has his new channel.

Mother of god... that's just... wow.

Good song though

I read this in Norm Macdonald's voice.

Buildup was definitely worth it.

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Alas, me neither.

Someone explain!

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You sweet, summer children...

It's the chorus from Billy Joel's Piano Man, one of his hits from the 80s:

Sing us a song, you're the Piano Man/ Sing us a song tonight/ While we're all in the mood for a melody/ And you've got us feelin' alright...

Even though I looked at the comments to get it, I still think those dad jokes at the start were the highlight of the story tbh.

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Ah. I don't typically pay any attention to mainstream musical stuff and I was born in the late 90s.

This was the perfect shaggy dog story. Or in this case, shaggy mare.

Regardless, please don't change anything.

Man, this is a BEAUTY! The little startup sequence in the beginning is a friggin' great hook, and when ya finished it off at the end with the song reference, oh man that is GENIUS! I couldn't resist making a reading of this beautiful fic of yours, hope ya don't mind! It's just TOO good!

Audio Linky!: https://youtu.be/XdNOeisNlSA

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Aajfsjgksgkk thankyouuu?

The MOMENT she asked him to turn into a piano, I knew where the joke was going. You got a grin outta me.

11177505 1974, actually.

mrk

Reading this story is like talking to my dad when we’re both on a business trip together.

Well played. 👏👏👏

This is one of the best feghoots I've seen on this whole site, bravo!

Recorded, should have it edited soon for going on Youtube.

If you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go bang my head against the wall.

11177699
I saw your video of this story. Very good. Maybe you can read one of my stories one day. Pony and Wolf Productions did.

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That we did. And we also did this one. Then again P.A.W. is a really small light ^^"

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Yet I’m always the one linking and letting them know, just like I use to do for Straight XD

Speaking of which, here you go ^^’

Cause I’m a good friend of visual and midnight, even if they’re yet to read any of my stories 😓
Good friend I am! 😁

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oh goddammit XD

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