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I think its a good sequel, i like when Spike is with the CMCs.
Although if the older sisters are there, I think Twilight should also be there, she is Spike's adoptive older sister.
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Well, you know how diplomacy is, especially for a princess of friendship.
Well.......damn. That’s kinda messed up for celestia to have not given a reason.
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I know. I was going to add two reasons. 1 reason was Celestia thought Spike was becoming too attached to her and didn't want Spike to become too dependent. She knew he and Twilight were destined for great things but needed to make sure they happened. The other reason was political reasons of her appearing like a mother of another species without a father.
I didn't add these because I write as I think, but I don't think as I write. It's more of a flow state writing kind of thing.
I want to add that it did hurt Celestia also, but as a semi-immortal who knew it was just mear years before her evil sister was about to come back, she decided to put aside feeling for the survival of her kingdom. This is all head cannon btw, and there is a 3rd reason that is not really cannon but an idea that floats in my head.
This chapter was pure gold, all those scenes you described, wow, they would be good for someone to make fanarts of this fanfic.
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Cant wait for the next chapter
This will not end good. But that make it better.
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I'm the writer. Trust me, it's fine.
It's not a party, it's an intimate get-together!
When are you gonna update?
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Thank you for being patient. I don't have a time frame, but hopefully soon. The main reason for the delay is my computer crapped out, and I couldn't recover the hard drives. Then a bunch of life stuff happened (me losing my job, helping out family, reoccurring migraines.). I am trying to rewrite it, but it's like standing up after getting kicked in the nuts. It has a bit of a silver lining as I'm rewriting it. I'm adding and taking away things I didn't think of before so you may get a (hopefully) better story.
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Oh sorry, i hope everything could be better in the future, dont worry, you better focus on the important stuff.
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Don't worry about it. I'm starting a new job Monday. Hopefully, this might get something written faster. I write better when I'm forced to do nothing for periods. Then I use my free time after to write my ideas.
I can finally read this chapter.
Wow, this is awesome and unlike other stories of this type, bonus points for being original.
Normally in a story of Spike having a love affair with a lot of girls, it's usually written that Spike is in heaven, but here he was more realistic by writing that Spike felt uncomfortable, making it realistic in a sense.
I bet it had to feel heavy, especially for the younger ones and thath means the CMCs and Spike experiencing the things their bodies feel, wow, what will Twilight say when she finds out everything her friends did with her little brother.
This really is a great story and I am really enjoying it. I still hope to see some Sparity between them. While I like him with the CMC I am still a sucker for the pairing that got me to this fandom and that being Sparity. It would be funny for Spike to make a request as a reward for all of this... and that being a intimate evening with Rarity lol.
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Thanks! While I like harem stories, I never understood why so many just had the guy be a sex god on his first go. Not to say I don't like those stories. And, well, I am a sucker for embarrassed nude males and embarrassed nude females.
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I'm glad you're enjoying it! I also like the Sparity pairing, but I also thought it was too one-sided on Rarity's part. I never got the impression that she meant it to be like that, but she still took advantage of Spike a bit too much.
I hope you continue the story.
There needs to be more