The Day Equestria Stood Stupid

A tear in the universe opens with strange brains flying out, which make everyone stupid.

Teen Rated: For being a little bit dark in places.

Sorry for the lame promo picture, but I couldn't get anything else, since I can't draw very well.

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Note: What's it a crossover with?

Minor spoiler detail Futurama.

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Paladin Redflare

Paladin Redflare #1 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

Could you dumb the story down a little? I don't think i'll be able to understand this. Hurrr durrr

Star Sage

Star Sage #2 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

It's a cross over with Transformers, right?

Bendy

Bendy #3 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

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Yes. Like the other nine or so fan fictions of mines.

If you do read it, I hope you don't think it's too bad.

By the way it's "Futurama" not Futurerama.

Distrance

Distrance #4 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

Bendy

Bendy #5 · Sep 16th, 2012 · · ·

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Well I can say it was entertaining, and mildly funny. I do like Futurerama.

Well that's the least I can hope for, it's still good.

There are quite a few sentences structured weird, grammar issues, and you should get more detailed with it.

Yeah, I should thrown in more details, maybe I'll send it to editors. Grammar issues? From stupidified Ponies or non-stupidified Ponies. Because some stupidified Ponies can barely speak like Pinkie Pie.

I don't bash people's creativity, but if you want it to be great get really creative, man. Just my opinion. I have read worse, but this could be better.

Hmm originality is important. But also other better MLP Fan Fiction writers than me using the Brain Spawn invade to Equestria I'd like to see.

I'd love to see other fan fiction writers own version of this.

Perhaps called it: The Why OF Derpy XD (Better MLP Fan Fiction writer you can take that title.)

Xerzes