So happy you didn't make the pones OP in this one, that tends to happy WAY to much in most cross overs, and I love the romance bits in this, I can't wait to see how the eevee family grows!

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I was thinking that exact same thing about OP ponies when I was writing this. I think it's a fandom thing, you know? Authors expect people want to read about the ponies just rolling over everyone because this is the pony fanfiction website. But it's 2022 now. A lot of us are rooting around other fandoms, bringing our Gypsy caravans all over the internet and learning about other IPs. It's never been easier to avoid the Isekai fiction trap.

Setting that aside, there are more battles to fight and there's no way the Pokémon are going to win all of them. Ponies are extremely powerful no matter how you slice it.

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I am dearly hoping that WHEN RD attacks she's 'pony-handled... her ego is massively annoying. I can only speculate how uncaring Twi may be to their bodily autonomy... and Fluttershy is who I am watching... she's gonna make them 'love' her... maybe how long do you plan before the eggs are layed?

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I think an RD battle is a certainty! The egg-laying aspect is something we'll learn about in chapter 5. As for Twi, I have special plans for her but won't elaborate.

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Yee, I can't wait for the next update then... wonder if Arceus had a hand in connection of the realms...

In the story 'Indomitable' they addressed her need to know everything... to the degree she 'stole' unhatched eggs... the MC almost murdered her

“You’ll have to excuse Ebon. He’s not really him when he’s hungry,” Edelweiss told Cadance who was eying him suspiciously.

Eat a snickers, Ebon.

In all seriousness, I enjoyed this chapter, especially the battle scene. I actually think this displays unicorns at their proper level of power, instead of the highly nerfed level of ability we saw on the show where the average unicorn was capable of nothing except opening a door or levitating a teacup. But before I get into a rant about that, let me also say that I’m very glad to see that my boi Umbreon is properly interested in stallions. He is exactly as he should be, and I can’t wait to see what trouble he gets into over in Equestria.

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Thanks, Sensei! I tried my best. I feel kinda bad two of my readers reversed their upvotes. I really thought I did a good job.

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You absolutely did. It’s a good chapter and I have no idea what their issue is. I’m enjoying getting to edit this. Keep it up!

I would read a chapter about Shining Armor x Ebon being better friends.

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Hell yeah!

I think it's safe to say there's going to be some M/M action down the road with Ebon.

i love this story, its both horny and fun like i wish life could be

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"What is drama but life with all the dull bits cut out?"

- Alfred Hitchcock.

Words I write by. Love your avi btw. My main character in PMD Darkness is a Charizard.

when's the next chapter?

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I'm going to start writing the next chapter after my Summer Sin entry is complete. Give me a couple of weeks.

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any chance when we can expect the next chapter i am asking because it is so rare to get anything with pokemon on fimfiction and you other stories have always something i have enjoyed reading so please don't think i am trying to be rude that is not my intentio

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No offense taken.

Well, I'm on hiatus at the moment and I can't tell you exactly how long it will be but I haven't given up on the story.