The world's greatest... eh... I'll get to it later.
Alicorns. The epitome of ponykind. Living symbols of Equestria's might. Masters of all that they survey. It is they who keep Equestria safe from all that would destroy it.
But when the Alicorns declare war on each other, who will protect Equestria? What can ordinary ponies do to save the land they love?
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Interesting. Keep it up, but you could stand to improve your comma usage. Still, most everything else is in place.
You got my approval. Thanks for giving me wisdom on my forum post, I will be sure to read this story tomorrow and give you feedback.
And did you make the cover?
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Yeah, I did make the cover. Drawn completely with a mechanical pencil.
Though I must point out that this wasn't the story I referenced in my response to your question about dislikes. You'll have to turn off your mature filter to see my other story.
PFFFT, WAIT TO SEE HOW BLESSED YOU ARE WHEN THESE BADASSES SHOW UP AT YOUR DOORSTEP.
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Lovely scripture! An early paean to the Elements of Harmony, I guess. It seems pretty authentic! But you spelled it 'Chaosfather' twice and 'Chaostfather' twice. Kinda chaotic!
Seems nice and suspenseful! I admit I just skimmed most of it, since it didn't really hold my interest. But I do like thinking about the tactical considerations of how to escape from a pack of beasts who can't climb trees but are relatively unrelenting, using a limited supply of magic.
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I'll admit it needs work since it was literally my first attempt at writing some kind of story. But I've been distracted by other things. You're following up on our conversation aren't you? My main story is mature if you have that filter on, though sex will not be a part of it for a long while yet because that's not what it's about.