On my way back from Zecora's hut, I found him, hurt, alone, and scared. I didn’t know how a pegasus colt had gotten lost out here in the depths of the Everfree Forest, but he needed help. So I showed him the same kindness I’d give to any other sick or injured critter. It had an unusual impact on him, and I have no idea what the lasting effects will be.
For the Who Crossed Over My Little Pony? Contest.
Peter Pegasus appeared in both Fantasia (1940) and Who Framed Roger Rabbit (1988).
Featured Mar 1-3, 2022.
Cover art by Calena.
Thanks to EverfreePony for an initial edit pass, to OConnerGT-R for a pre-read, and Airy Words for a final edit pass.
Chapters (3)
Great artwork!
Huh now thinking of it I’m surprise no one has made a cross over with Peter Pegasus. Can’t wait to see how this will go
It's funny seeing this story now, as I'm currently rereading an unrelated story which starts with Fluttershy meeting a black pegasus colt with a silvery gray mane in the Everfree.
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Fortunately, the story is all written and will be fully published this week (only 3 chapters).
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You probably haven't read The Disney Chronicles: Fantasia yet.
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Not even aware of it's existence.
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They're on my user page, wattpad and Fanfiction if you're interested.
Yeah. Not much I can say other than great job on the start of this short story. The exchange, characterizations and future chapter set-up are pretty well done thus far. Yeah, I admit I haven't thought of a crossover like this, but it makes sense thus far. Definitely liked the work that went into Fluttershy and Peter's first meeting And, yeah, I can sympathize somewhat with Peter concerning some of his issues with school and appreciated the mentions of the subtle, but significant differences between horses and ponies.
Definitely looking forward to the other two chapters of this story.
So cute, I loved Fantasia as a kid and still do
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Me too.
Again, a great job on this chapter (second-to-last given what I read in a review response). The exchanges, characterizations and finale set-up are all well done. Glad Peter was able to get Fluttershy's attention to the injured hawk AND calm it enough that he and Fluttershy can provide a bit of care before getting it to the vet. And the bird escort to Twilight's castle concerning the message was another beautiful detail.
Definitely looking forward to the final chapter.
I like this, very good chapters and short crossover.
Excellent job on the final chapter of this short story. Definitely appreciated the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up. Really liked Rainbow arriving with Peter's parents and how much they appreciated the fact that Peter wasn't seriously hurt. And I'm glad Peter was impressed enough with the animals to want to be a vet when he grows up. Using the time it will take for his wing to heal in order to catch up on his schoolwork is an appropriate punishment for flying off without letting his parents know where he was going as well. Also loved how impressed Fluttershy and Rainbow were with Peter's parents' flying.
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Hm. I'm not sure what I expected given the minimal amount of source material you had to work with, but you definitely took me by surprise. Full-sized winged horses just being a thing in this setting, Peter's sapience, the general low-key slice-of-life approach... If you asked me what I thought someone would do with this pairing, this wasn't it.
Novelty aside, there's not much to comment on. It's nice enough and has Fluttershy wonderfully in her element, but not terribly much actually happens. And given that minimal source material, Peter ends up feeling like a generic OC. Still an enjoyable little tale all things considered. Thank you for it, and best of luck in the judging.
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Thanks for the comments.
The source material is pretty thin. About all you get is that he has a family, and perhaps a little hint as to his personality. I thought exploring a character who was NOT well known could be fun.
This is an enjoyable story. It's short, simple, and quite heartwarming. It's pace was well kept, to my extent of reading, and it leaves me wanting more.
I truly hope to see some more stories of Peter and Fluttershy interactions. Thank you for this wonderful time. (Bow)
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Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I do have an idea for a sequel, but as we all know, it's a l-o-n-g way from an idea to an actual story. Who knows what the future may bring.
I really like what you did with Peter and his parents, here; though they never talked in the original work, this feels accurate to how they would act. This is a damn good story.
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Unlike characters like Elmer Fudd or Bugs Bunny, I didn't have a pre-defined personality to work with. I'm glad you enjoyed how Peter and his parents turned out.
Thanks for your comment.
Harry's cool in my book. Like, I'd totally go fishing with him.
Me too Harry.
This was a wonderful story.
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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!
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Thanks for giving it a look/see.
That was adorable. I love it.
Take a like and a fave.
I don’t mean to be rude but you misspelled “yay”
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Fixed. Thanks.