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kalash93


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Loved it!!!!!!

This is basically what hooves art makes

awesome story mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

So... is this human or anthro? Just curious, because what was tagged and what was to be found in the story has me a bit puzzled. To be clear, I don't mind either, but I still prefer to know what I'm reading, you know?

Going by the cover-art, I'd put my money on anthro... for now.

I saw at least one instance of the name Milano, which I always liked for the character. I think you wanted to use Cream Heart consistently.

Kissing his date deeply stifled his moans as their tongues struggled, surging at each other like he surged balls deep into her cock

Uh… rewrite?

"why is everyone always picking on me?"
"'cause you took your mom to the prom, and got lucky"

This was actually really enjoyable, both for the lewdness present and the sweetness between the two.

Any chance you might be making a sequel?

It has a lot of spelling errors in a few places, but other than that. Great story. I especially was snickering at everyone at the prom being jealous of Button and Cream Heart. Something tells me everyone is going to be talking about it for years to come.

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Indeed that inspired it.

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Thanks. I'm glad so many others enjoyed it so much. Oh yes this is going to be part of more than just the school's lore.

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I aimed to walk the sweeter side of the scenario; I didn't want to overdo it on the pornography, and it seems like I succeeded.

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Everyone hates a lucky motherfucker.

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I too prefer Milano and I began writing with that, but alas it's not recognized as her real name. Much nerd r@3g was had. I remember back when that was the accepted name.

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Thanks for catching that, and corrected.

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Ses

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Yeah it's anthro, I just forgot to tag it so.

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Thankee true

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Our battle will be legendary.

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Sorta. I didn't imagine Cream Heart as having his girls' kinds of proportions. Cream Heart is a bit tall but still a svelte hourglass; I actually had a particular person in mind when I envisioned her. I'd say Sweetie has a body more like Hevexy's depictions of her.

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Thanks, always glad to see an old fan likes the new stuff. ;)

this is a very nice story, I prefer my ponies feral, but I still liked this story a lot ^^

Get rid of that source image link. :pinkiesick:

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He grinned at her and then drank the rest of you.

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