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Ooooooh god. Gotta love 'em
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You're really too good at this
I probably wouldn't be able to take it if the everything was going to be like what it will end up as, but you made it so the reader isn't constantly terrified or whatever, but still have enough in it to always be uncomfortable. Even better (or worse) you made it funny and stuff at points to make the reader start to enjoy it and get all content and stuff, then throw in a cruel reminder that not all is right in Wonderland.
Sorry if this doesn't make any sense; I'm tired.
I'm sad this isn't the direction the story actually took