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This story is a sequel to My Little Pony: Sparkling Harmony: The Harmonic Medleys


For thirteen years, Sparkler suffered under the torment of her fellow classmates in KiliHima School, unable to do anything to stop it from happening. So to say that she is less than pleased with the Cutie Map for sending her there for a Friendship Mission would be an understatement.

Little does she know that this is her chance to at last make friends with the two remaining students at her old school that didn't hate her.

With her family and friends/bandmates by her side, as well as a few extra friends, can she handle encountering her old bullies? Will she maybe get revenge on them even? Only time will tell.

If this Story gets 25 likes I'll add to Sparkling Storytime

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 98 )

And so it begins. Heh, was about to hit the hay...but apart from Sparkler, I hope it won't be too much for Hanzal either

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It probably won't be.

He'll just be glad that Sparkler is able to make friends with every pony who liked her in school

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next

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just saying given how he suffered similar

Sparkler also knows more magic and has likely grown in her power since she last saw her former class mates. We also can't forget she isn't going alone how much abuse of Sparkler is Twilight going to put up with

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Absolutely none. That's how much abuse Twilight will put up with.

And yeah. She might be more powerful and magically proficient since the last time she saw the bullies, but her PTSD from that period of her life has not gone away.

You're very welcome! heh, now you give me an idea

Only critic after all the traveling of ponies to and from KiliHima Village in recent years, return of Luna and such would it still be called wings and horn combo? Yes its a village in middle of nowhere but they aren't as isolated or unknown as they were 2 - 3years ago

Superb chapter, im more nervous than a chicken in a henhouse, Sparkler will pull through:heart:

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News just doesn’t travel there and nopony thinks to talk.

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Interesting analogy. One Sparkler would cringe at.😂

11166517 I'm sorry if NO other news traveled there the return of Luna would of, remember the sun didn't rise in Equestria for over a day so the sun in the village either never rose or set during the period

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Well OK stuff like THAT would have reached them, but stuff like someone being an Alicorn probably isn't something that gets brought up

I thought at most Twilight might say something to Bradford but he didn't provoke her in any fashion. I've been there working on customer service autopilot you hear the customer and help them but you don't engage with them or at times really notice them. I wonder what else the store sells as Dream catchers doesn't seem like that something someone could make a living with considering the limited customer base of such a small village

thought i favorited the story but i did not but now i did also great chapter

nicely done! Though, is planet not a bit...much? Would country not suit better?

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Nope, I do intend for KiliHima Village to be the most remote village on the planet. The reason will be clear in due time.

11168103i just meant in terms of speech. not actual location

Yep Bradford, ya done goofed lol, keep up the awesome work of chapters XD

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I'll be releasing another chapter tonight. :) Where We'll get Brad's side of what happened that night.

me too. Heh, now i wonder about something

great chapter wonder what is going to happen next

Interesting chapter and I can SO readily see what happened to Brad its just a matter of timing

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You mean you can readily see Brad getting screwed over by his “friends” in the name of pranking their favorite target of Harassment? Or did you mean something else by that?

ooooo, this is getting interesting and intense and emotional.......im getting all jumpy lol :pinkiehappy:

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Yeah. Turns out Brad got screwed over because he decided to be a blabbermouth.

I wonder if Sparkler’ll actually believe him.

from that note who cares if people hate her it's your story

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I know. Just thought I’d make it clear that she’s here to stay.

11168640 Brad getting screwed by I wouldn't call them friends with friends like that really who needs enemies. I can also see Sparklers reaction due to the timing that Bradford wasn't a victim but also one of those behind it

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Yeah. To her, Brad looked like he was in on it the whole time.

Suffice to say, you can bet your flanks that Brad disowned his former friends after that whole mess.

I’m including this information because I finally have a chance to warn you. My three new kids, Sprinkle Medley, Pedal Medley, and Mystic Medley (yes, they all chose to take on my last name), are actually clones of me that a psycho ex-noble created for his own evil purposes. Now, don’t worry, the clones aren’t under any sort of brainwashing or anything. But I just wanted to let you know so that you aren’t surprised when you have three extra kids calling you grandma and grandpa. I’ve included a picture of them so you can see what they look like. They chose to don new appearances so that’s why they don’t look like my clones.

Now we need a full family picture

Sparkler beamed when she saw that box. “Perfect. That must be all the receivers.” She said happily as she took the box from Derpy.

Considering who's delivering, there's a fair 30% probability that those aren't what you expect

Twilight let out a sigh. She saw it coming from a mile away. She rightly predicted that Sparkler would reject the map’s calling if it was gonna send her to KiliHima Village. I would REALLY like to know what made them want to bully Sparkler. She thought. Nopony should be afraid of going back to their place of birth, but because the vast majority of Sparkler’s old classmates put her down constantly, Sparkler had resolved to never go back there again, not even to visit her parents when her parents could come visit her. “Yeah we’re not gonna leave as promptly this time.” She commented.

It would be funny if cutie marks continue to glow until one accept the mission.
It would be a great incentive
Like "Why do I have to be a darn lamp for wanting to stay home??"

“Those idiots tormented me for 13 years and left me friendless until I came to Ponyville. Could be satisfying to rub it in their faces that I CAN make friends.” Sparkler reasoned. “And yes. It is a learning opportunity for the kids. But I won’t promise that I won’t skip town the moment I get egged by any of those bullies.”

Is it time for a revenge song? It would be cool if the band composed one just to say to those bull to go **** ***

“Let’s just hope it doesn’t turn out the way I’m confident it will turn out.” Sparkler responded. She was likely going to regret it, but the good outweighed the bad. Seriously though, if those idiots egg me again, that will be the last time I ever set hoof in KiliHima Village.

This time, though, if they pelt you they're gonna get sentenced for treason.
Just saying

o need t be embarresed, Sparkler, this was cute!

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Hopefully the song choice made sense

Wonders if the solution to the Friendship problem is already working itself out

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Who knows. Sparkler and Twilight might not have just found the pony yet.

Feathers is right xD what's with ponies breaking out into song and dance

Beautiful song, got misty-eyed for a few seconds, wonderful chapter, cant wait for more XD:heart:

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I think it’s Harmony magic at play especially when a pony needs an emotional push to voice their thoughts out.

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I anticipate two more chapters. in this story. And trust me, the finale is going to be awesome.

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