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Changeling-Writer


Just your everyday bug bibliophile, just don't ask me to actually publish what I write. And if I do? Just know that it's likely foolish.

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The neighboring kingdom of Aurora lays to the north of Equestria has always been reclusive. Much like there Queen Eventide, even through there generations of isolationism the diarchy of Equestria has always tried to form relations to no avail.
Queen Eventide had always respectfully decline the many invitations sent by Celestia. Mandatory meeting of the kingdoms was always visited by a trusted representative, and dispatching hardly sincere apologies as she declined to attend the celebrations. Yet to the princesses surprise the queen accepted to attend this years Grand Galloping Gala, why now of all celebrations?
Eventide, the queen, is a unicorn. As was her husband, King Astrid, who has sadly passed. And she to will pass on one day. The royal pony sisters had always wondered why she had not chosen a heir to assend to the throne on the day of her passing. But they didn't know of her only child, her heir. One who had wished to see the Equestrian capital city of Canterlot. The princess of the Aurorian throne, alicorn heir to her mother. Princess Twilight Aurora Sparkle, child of Queen Eventide

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(This story is inspired and continued from the original story by Meowofy. The Young Alicorn)
(In this AU, princess Luna Never became Nightmare moon. Celestia never took a student.)
(Lastly, this is my first long haul story I plan on publishing. There will likely be mistakes, I am open to constructive criticism. Let me know of any problems you find)

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 29 )

Hold on. What separates this one from Young Alicorn? This feels like a straight copy of the other story.

I loved the first chapter, it was an amazing introduction. But it was missing some important ponies. Like Velvet, I added detailing and followed through with the originals idea. However I always felt the second chapter was always rushed. From there the story will be diverting largely from the original. Slowing down what seemed to to me to be a harsh chapter.

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If I can I'll be posting the second chapter before I go to bed tonight. Not reflecting onto most of what Meowofy did.

It seems good so far. Good luck making it as good as it's inspiration.

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Who the hell is this idiot?

Wait, what happened to the original?

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As Meowofy stated it was a simple idea that he wouldn't be commuting much time into. He either unpublished the story or deleted it. I don't know which. So I thought that I might try and bring it a new life.

Where can I read the original story?

i remember reading this tory before.

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Actually a good Question. It seems like it got deleted. At least I canˋt find it anymore.

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Meowofy took it down for some reason.

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Aw man, the Story was very promissing :(

Interesting story so far keep up the good work.

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i'm glad you did so, i liked the original. i cant wait to see what you do with it!

its a shame that the original got unpublished/deleted, even abandoning an unfinished story is better then deleting it :/

love what you are doing here with this story looking forward to more

i do hope that this does not ruin the life of shining and his family, else great update Cheers

Thanks for the great update hope for more soon

Waiting for the next chapter:twilightsmile:

She remained silent the sliver chains that framed her face raping around her horn where a turquoise blue jem rested against her forehead.

WRAPPING! IT’S WRAPPING! WRAPPING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fizzy didn’t hesitate as she reared up on her hind hooves as raped her arms around the lavender alicorn.

AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!! WRAPPED!!! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THINGS GOOD IN LIFE, IT’S WRAPPED!!!!!!

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Dear Celestias flaming teats I never even noticed that. Thanks :facehoof:

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Happy to help. Was a bit of a disturbing mental image which I wanted to bleach out, so sorry if that came across as a but aggressive.

Yeah update thanks it was great

Well i don't really know what to say other then its a great update

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Yes, you can read the the first three original chapters on fimfetch.

That was a good chapter goodluck with the next one.

The only three that would understand the feeling of watching the world shift and change around you. It was something that Eventide would be able to teach her daughter.

I think this should be "It was something that Eventide would not be able to teach her daughter".

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i also liked the original so i want to see what happens with this

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