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Dovaki


"There is no wrong way to fantasize" © Celestia. A Ukrainian/Russian writer

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Короче говоря: ПОЛНАЯ ПИЗДА!

Сюжет трахает мозги.

P.S. Кому не нравится, не читайте!

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Хз , как по мне норм на данный момент

OMG YES ANOTHER GREAT FALLOUT STORY IN THE WORK YES CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT

"To the east... That's where Caesar's Legion lands are. After their defeat at Hoover Dam, it's chaos down there."

"I'll take the detour. It will be a long journey... But. If something serious happens that you can't handle when I leave - which I doubt - then call me on the radio and I'll teleport here using Big Mountain Transportalponder."

"Absolutely. What about your friends? They'll be surprised at your sudden departure. You didn't tell them you were leaving soon."

"I don't like long good-byes. Just in case, I'll leave a holographic record of the reason for my decision. It'll be in my room. There will also be a diary with my thoughts on the past. When they know all about my past, they'll understand why I don't sit still. You figured it out..."

"To the east... That's where Caesar's Legion lands are. After their defeat at Hoover Dam, it's chaos down there."

"I'll take the detour. It will be a long journey... But. If something serious happens that you can't handle when I leave - which I doubt - then call me on the radio and I'll teleport here using Big Mountain Transportalponder."

"Absolutely. What about your friends? They'll be surprised at your sudden departure. You didn't tell them you were leaving soon."

You are repeating yourself here. Is that on purpose?

Вместо новой главы на русском я вижу перевод на английский. Ну да ладно, и так сойдёт. :twistnerd:

*Crazy laughter * Dovaki, you are awesome. Really. When we waited for 30th chapter you started rewrite ENTIRE story.
Now, when we waiting for 31st chapter you desided to TRANSLATE story to English. I have only one question: Брат, ты на приколе?
Anyway, thank you for your work. When i started reading your fic i was in 9th class. Now, i'm In the third year of university and waiting for ending of your fic.

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No, it's a mistake. Translate problems:twilightblush:

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От вас ничего не скроешь, ахахах

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:rainbowlaugh:
I can't stop laughing. I deliberately didn't say I was going to translate it into English, because I was expecting that reaction from you. And I was going to tell you when I finished the thirty-first chapter. But don't worry. I'm taking my time with the translation. I was planning to translate two chapters for now. I promise I'll start working on the thirty-first chapter in the next few days:ajsmug:.

congrats, you may have written something Fallout Equestria-related that i can actually stomach
we'll have to see how that goes tho
edit: you now have my attention

А можно ссылку на оригинал?

Does it incorporate any canon from Project Horizons

(except Mothership Zeta which I don't count as canon)

Personally I enjoyed Mothership Zeta and the cameo of the alien in Fallout 4, but yeah, I totally understand why you would completely disregard it as canon since it's just a random side-story with effectively no bearing to what's going on in the Capital Wasteland.

I have a couple questions: Are the chapter going to be around the typical 15-20k area?

2: How often do you plan on uploading chapters?

It's nice to see another Fallout story, though the main issue I have with long stories is they tend to upload faster than I can keep up with the large chapters. I'll give it a shot and see what happens.

A mysterious magnum, an expensive gift from a guitarist.

I'm fairly confident to say this man is the son of the Mysterious Stranger, from what I've managed to dig up.

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Так я и не говорю что это плохо. Просто еще одна история из этой вселенной

К тому же на этом сайте только несколько русских авторов... Поэтому я поставлю вам плюс за ваш труд.

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"Are the chapter going to be around the typical 15-20k area?"

Most of the time

"How often do you plan on uploading chapters?"

One chapter per month, I think. It takes time, and I need to end story on Russian. I plan to combine this two processes. Also, my country suddenly found itself in a war with Russia, so I don't know how things will go...

О, теперь и на английском. Мои поздравления автору.

I don't envy ponies without horns... how do they tie their shoelaces?

Very carefully? :derpytongue2:

Hey you doing ok with the Ukrainian/Russian, since you know you are a Ukrainian/Russian

Glad to hear you're doing okay during these hard times in your country. Take care and stay safe.

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Glad you like it. Thank you :3

Glad to see this update. Took a while, but I do love chunky chapters

Radiation Pony...Oh, God.

Slava Ukraini!
Take care brother/sister for war is never kind to anyone. Stay Safe.

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Glory to heroes!
I live near Kiev and in some way it's safe here. The only danger in this war for me is a rocket or a missile. Although there are no military targets around my house, so the chance of a rocket missing and hitting me is pretty low.

Another good chapter done

This one is a nice chapter.
don't worry about a chapter being more talk and less fight they cant all be action all the time, that ruins the fun.
also you going to make him the element of generosity.

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I always try to make plot points appropriate within the established rules of a fictional world. So, your suggestion may or may not be true. I always leave it to myself to choose the plot moves that will be most fitting :ajsmug:.

我逐渐加大了嘴唇对她的压力。明尼奥拉以同样的方式回应。吻变得更强,...热。。。

How can it develop so fast?It's hard to understand.

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This reminds me of this song.《Chant of Selflessness》.
But unfortunately, in the world of radiation, people with this kind of morality will see God first.

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What do you mean by "so fast"? What exactly is hard for you to understand in this moment with Minneola?

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Why did they go to bed so soon?
Has the radiation world fallen to this level?

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The main character is just a passer-by.She is so free to dedicate her body!

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Yeah, I know about that. I have been criticized for it most times, even though I have tried to justify it somehow. But it's a fictional story. There will always be assumptions in stories; it's not necessary to take such things so seriously.

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Oh, my God. This is well understood, and there is no shortage of examples in real life.Will the protagonist have a large population of mares?
I can't help but think of the funny thing that "black people have no fathers".

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"Why did they go to bed so soon? Has the radiation world fallen to this level?"

In a ruined world, the morality is somewhat different. Spontaneous intimacy is quite common because there is too much risk in developing a strong long-term relationship. You or your partner could die at any moment.

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"Will the protagonist have a large population of mares?"

Not large but a few mares he will have

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So I can't accept this kind of thing. A moral person in a radioactive world would be the first to go to God.
True love does not lie in the admiration on the outside, but in the admiration of the inner world and the strong resonance and sublimation of the feelings.
It takes a long time for a young man and woman to go from love and marriage to gray-haired old age together. Only when both parties share the same goal and strive for lofty ideals, will the fire of love never go out and the family's happiness will be maintained.

In real life, I would never have been able to have such a love.
Because "there is anesthesia around". "More and more young people are so addicted to drugs that they can't see anything positive.
They know that material prosperity cannot satisfy them completely, but instead of seeking a higher purpose, they act like animals."
"Surely on the surface they influenced clothing and hairstyles. Men had long hair, flared trousers and satchels that hung over the shoulders and so on. Probably the most significant change they brought to society was widespread drug use.

You know, I really like your story. It's a lot that they didn't put a character from the video game Fallout. In this case, it's a conionation of the vault dweller and the messenger being the same subject, according to certain theories of iceberg fans, our protagonist will come from a world with so many parallels both of its world and the new world as its differences and that is trapped in a new body and they have to adapt to the new citustion

in another case that another character of the fiction you could in fanfic with this theme I mean we put x ´character in the world of fallout equestria ami to put an example it would be these characters
star butterfly Marco Díaz in the case of star would be ´because of his mastery of magic a magic´popletly unusual and very versatile and bitter would be his mastery of martial arts his experience in supervicenia in irrefutable lands of life such as never zone and for having I get his very valuable dimensional scissors, another character would be Marc Spector, Steven Grant, Jake Lockley, Mister Knight, Moon Knight with the help of his partner the moon god Khonshu with his vast knowledge in all kinds of magic and knowledge in general of many things and knowing the god khonshu his philosophy of sharing together everyone who does wrong to be in a world full of criminality and evil where heroes are missing would not hesitate to tell his avatar moon knight to distribute his fist of justice in his name new mind finally mark grayson, invincible has everything necessary for this new world to put more than necessary to be able to make a difference to give a little answer I go num Some of his powers were like super strength enough to go down a mountain, super flight and speed more than enough to make a fool of Rainbow Dash herself, super resistance, invulnerability to almost everything that the world of what the equestrian wasteland can throw at him, well I hope your opinion respectfully

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I'm glad that you like my story :3

As for the fact that the Courier and the Lone Wanderer are the same character, I am aware of this fan theory. I still like it, but the theory breaks down within canon with one simple fact: the catastrophic events in the Divide took place before 2277, before the Lone Wanderer got out of Vault according to the canon events of Fallout 3. Because Joshua Graham says that the outcome of the First Battle of Hoover Dam was affected by a disastrous event at the Divide that caused some of the NCR troops to not arrive for the battle.

I can say that we were both lucky that NCR's supply lines and land routes north of Mojave Outpost were destroyed before the Battle of Hoover Dam. Something bad happened near Death Valley, at a place called the Divide. NCR couldn't cut across anymore and it slowed down their reinforcements. Terrible storms ripped entire companies apart before they even got to Nevada soil.

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I'm not familiar with the fandoms you mentioned, so I have nothing to say about that)

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