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EpicGamer10075


Gamer, Writer, (Aspiring) Artist, and really fricking tired. Commissions open.

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Coco Pommel and Gilda could hardly be any more different; one is a rather normal schoolgirl with a nice, reserved demeanor, good grades, and safe hobbies, while the other is the bully that everyone on campus fears to some extent, even if they do manage to keep her just inside of the rules.

However, despite what most may expect, Coco can’t keep herself away from Gilda for long--the griffon’s large, burly form lights a fire in the petite earth pony, and while it normally makes her face burst into flames and her gait turn a little funny, finding out something she should’ve expected finally makes her take a step towards making her dreams come true.


My entry for the Crackship Competition.

Coco Pommel x Gilda in a stereotypical shy girl/tough girl ship, in an AU with a school with many different species from MLP in it. (Inspiration taken from Susie/Noelle fanfics from deltarune)

I’m doing something a bit different with this one, as while usually I tend to focus on a specific point above all else, here I’m just trying to make a nice ship-fic. I would appreciate some feedback and constructive criticism.

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Comments ( 4 )

Can somebody please comment on this?
I need some actual feedback here.

11162379
It's excellent.
Shame it's a one-shot though.

11163151
Thank you for that.

While I may like to do other stuff with this, this story was mostly just for a shipping contest. I am more confident in this one winning than other contest entries of mine, due to it actually being a proper ship rather than the strange messes of my last few entries.

But on this AU, I doubt that I’m really going to do much else with it, as it’s really not very interesting or unique amongst the many Suselle ships one may find on places like AO3.org.

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