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Steel Quill


A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!

Comments ( 10 )

Damn, stopped before the best bit!

Oh fuck. Steel Quill has entered the game.

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-thor-ragnarok-lightning-explosion

awesome story mate keep it up cant want for the next story:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

To her surprise, she’d said yes. And she had not regretted it ever since. Though getting that to be an admission by her would require steel pliers and various other devices of force.

Devices like the rack, thumb screws, red hot pokers, and a tongue loosener.

Enough of a plot to want more. The porn was nice...

Well. Fuck. This story right here made me want to cancel all of my other projects and exclusively write Aria femdom, and I cannot put into words how much I mean that as a compliment.

It was fun, it was sweet, it was hot as all fuck, and I quite liked the idea of Aria being mute. I've toyed with the idea that losing their pendants had lasting impact on the Sirens, but I never quite took it that far. It made the story flow in a rather memorable way.

If I do have to complain about something (and if I'm here than I am afraid I do have to complain), it's that I think having both Aria and Cal know sign language is a bit of an easy way out. I would have been interested to see how things would play out of Cal and Aria couldn't exactly communicate perfectly, but still found a way to convey their feelings and make a connection. Not that what you did was bad, just a little safe.

Excellent stuff, and thank you for your submission (and for acknowledging my birthday :))

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Thank you so much for reading it! I had a bit of a challenge in making it work, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will admit, me using sign language was a bit of an easy out in this sort of approach. I thought of other avenues, but those avenues would've required much more labor and time that I didn't have then. Still, this was fun! And again, happy birthday!

Finally got round to this.

God damn that was hot.

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