A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
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Damn, stopped before the best bit!
Oh fuck. Steel Quill has entered the game.
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awesome story mate keep it up cant want for the next story
Devices like the rack, thumb screws, red hot pokers, and a tongue loosener.
Enough of a plot to want more. The porn was nice...
Well. Fuck. This story right here made me want to cancel all of my other projects and exclusively write Aria femdom, and I cannot put into words how much I mean that as a compliment.
It was fun, it was sweet, it was hot as all fuck, and I quite liked the idea of Aria being mute. I've toyed with the idea that losing their pendants had lasting impact on the Sirens, but I never quite took it that far. It made the story flow in a rather memorable way.
If I do have to complain about something (and if I'm here than I am afraid I do have to complain), it's that I think having both Aria and Cal know sign language is a bit of an easy way out. I would have been interested to see how things would play out of Cal and Aria couldn't exactly communicate perfectly, but still found a way to convey their feelings and make a connection. Not that what you did was bad, just a little safe.
Excellent stuff, and thank you for your submission (and for acknowledging my birthday :))
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Thank you so much for reading it! I had a bit of a challenge in making it work, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. I will admit, me using sign language was a bit of an easy out in this sort of approach. I thought of other avenues, but those avenues would've required much more labor and time that I didn't have then. Still, this was fun! And again, happy birthday!
Finally got round to this.
God damn that was hot.