Name pronounced "Five-u-min-on-for" ---- Home of a whole bunch of Cozy Glow stories, and one Spike story.
Cozy Glow encounters the Cutie Mark Crusaders for one last face off before their fates are decided. The fillies clash heads in conflict, and express their feelings to each other. Cozy wishes to be rid of these meddlesome Crusaders, whilst each of the Crusaders disagree with how to handle the villainous filly.
In a story that takes place in the middle of an alternate Season 9.
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Haven't seen you in a while! Hello hello, friend!
This looks to be fun.
Poor Cozy, it looks like Tirek and Chrysalis value her skills less then they did in the show. Hopefully this will somehow result in a better outcome for her.
Her aunts are that bad? I'm not surprised.
That would imply someone caring about them enough to watch them.
Wouldn't it make more sense to just have a CMC tag and a Cozy Glow tag?
I like the way this story develops.
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It's more about her parents it seems. It would actually be weird, if it was about her aunts, as they seemed loving and caring guardians of Scootaloo in tv show.
Interesting little heart to heart between Cozy and Scootaloo. I will be interested to see how this will play out and if the CMC can keep her from getting sent back to Tartarus.
Now if only Twilight, Celestia and the rest of the adults could comprehend that.
This is a good point. Cozy never killed anyone in the show, even when she had the chance to.
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K then. In my opinion the character tags are fine. There are other stories that tag CMC, and Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo all at once. I personally like having all their names tagged, because they all play individual roles, but also have the tag CMC, because at the end of the day it is them in a group setting. I didn't reply because I didn't think it was that critical a detail, but apologies for late response anyway.
I feel like Scoots is close to connecting with Cozy, but AB and Sweetie are just making it harder.
I'm liking the story so far!
I'm eager to see what will happen next :3
This was an interesting development. Really didn't expect it out of Scootaloo, but it's obvious she doesn't want to go back to being flightless.
But now what will Cozy and Scootaloo do?
I do like that AB was at least genuine with her proposal. Was going to leave it to Cozy to decide.
The power of friendship... Too bad that Cozy did not point more how great is their friendship
No, Scootaloo! Friendship! Then again, Cozy did deserve this one for all the double crossing she's been doing lately. Hard to tell when she's being genuine or not.
Reading this chapter, I somehow managed to remember This story a Orphan Scootaloo teaching how to use kindness of others for the 'Poor Orphan¡
Is there any fighting in this story?
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The CMC would never do something so barbaric. And Cozy pities the CMC too much to actually hurt them.
In all seriousness, having the CMC fight didn't seem right. There isn't much to fight over anyway, as this isn't the most high stakes story. Besides, they ain't got hooves as strong as horses, they got hearts as strong as horses. It's their character that's their strength, and it's their most effective tool against Cozy Glow.
Go on Cozy, talk to Scoots, this will be your only chance.
The friendship of the CMC has been reaffirmed.
Well, it was luck, but Cozy managed to stay hidden instead of let her anger get over her
I love this chapter! You make it so interesting!
Although they didn't call out the name, they had been discussing cozy in front of her, all the time!
Well, the words of experience from the genius evil little girl
She does actually have a point. If anyone wanted to reform her, they would have protested locking her in a tiny cage.
Equestria's newest princesses.
Ouch, that was sad. The one time Cozy wanted to genuinely befriend someone...
I love how Cozy told off Scootaloo's parents like that. Most likely losing patience and good sense from her own experiences. Hopefully, it won't be the end of her.
Twilight have a legal right to call child services on those stupid parents, I think Rainbow Dash would be far better parent for Scootaloo
She’s not wrong.
I have to wonder now, are you going to rewrite the entire finale with this story, or are we just going to reimprison the villains? I doubt that even if the CMCs used the Bell that they could defeat Tirek and Chrysalis (since their magic and love could be easily drained). Also, on Grogar; is he Discord, or not? And, will this story share the same backstory for Cozy as Cozy Chronicles had It feels incomplete if we just cut it before the Finale takes place.
Just asking.
Great chapter! I do hope that Tirek and Chrysalis won't do anything too rash with Scootaloo and co.
Twilight sure is full of herself with that school. Funny, how that doesn't apply to the mare who had a loving father and the trust of an entire village, which she abused severely or the chaos spirit who was given a second chance only to betray they them later. They never had to send Cozy to Tartarus, they were just too lazy/unwilling to try and reform her like they did with others.
And that is a great retort to that argument. Memorization does not equal actual learning.
Well, maybe if Scootaloo become the hero that defeated Chrysalis and Tirek she could manage to stay in Ponyville
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Nationalism is strong with this one
it's a miracle that equestria doesn't already started colonization if their youths are already this brainwashed.
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But that doesn't make for a good story, does it?
Drama and suffering all the way
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I don't think a violence jock like Rainbow Dash would be good parent for her.
Kill off one of CMCs and turned this story into nationalism please
No one got hurt by discord scheme eh tell that to king sombra
On the bright side it not ended as badly for villian three here
Don't worry about the story being long, it's been good so far.
P.S: Do you think this story could have more viewers if it was featured in more groups?
yep, this story is officially derailed
said a member of the lunatic group who sentenced her to prisonmax.
lobotomy. cheap, quick, and easy
Can Twilight and Company fix this friendship problem?
If this is a sentence where Cozy Glow stops talking mid sentence you should put in a dash or a line of dots indicating it.
Other than that it's a good chapter. It's nice to finally get around to this story again.
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So... Cozy Glow is from Califoalnia? And I thinking she was from Fillydelphia
Would her parents happen to be those from Cozy Chronicles?
Anyways, great ending, but I kinda wanted to see Cozy reconcile with Tirek and Chrysalis or something. Oh well.
So what was on those papers they read?
Great story, even if there were some loose ends. I hope Cozy has a good time with her parents.
I love that!
What was Discord's plan from the end of the last chapter?
I can already tell you're setting up a cool sequel here, and I'm liking this story, so far. All kinds of following now!