'Ello mate. I'm a professional. A professional with standards, just like other professionals. Although I'm different. I'm a Professional Professional. Anyway, enough of that, onto the real stuff.
My name is Mundy, but call me The Sniper. I'm about to tell you all about a town, a country.... heck, it could even have been a planet!
All I know is I wasn't wearing Pyrovision Goggles, I wasn't insane, and the population was made up of PONIES. TALKING PONIES. AND MYTHICAL CREATURES.
And by the way, I'm not lying. There was your old run-of-the-mill ponies, but then there was unicorns and pegasus everywhere, and I saw 2 unicorn pegasus things, too.
Anyway, enough with the chit chat, onto what happened.
Chapters (8)
I shall read this a bit later.
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WOO! My first fic here is good already!
Celebratory dance mode!
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Woohoo!
I'm not going to bother doing chapter 2 yet so here is a filler chapter instead.
Let's see how many people can guess who stopped The Sniper in his tracks.
Hint: Party for the new Pony!
As soon as I saw you commenting on the Engineer crossover that you made this Sniper Crossover, I came hard. Even though I suck as a Sniper, I like all TF2 Character crossovers.
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Thanks dude.
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No problem. The only bad thing I see in your chapters/parts is that they are way too short. Try to keep them atleast above 1000 letters to make it interesting. If you cannot make 1000+ word chapters, try to keep them atleast above 700.
I see you have edited the chapter.
Now, I cannot wait for the next one.
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Ah, glad to see somebody who likes my first story.
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Yeah, your story is nice so far. Just avoid the occasional grammatical error.
Was bothered to read this.
*ahem*
The gaps in between paragraphs I found somewhat irritating, the plot seemed quite rushed. If Sniper WASN'T a pony it would've caused a ton more conflict.
Take this into mind. Don't say it's good off the bat, all it did was intrigue me.
Go look up Waking Nightmares, the person does one hell of a Pony/TF2/Dark crossover and I love it.
I know this ingredient.
Oh, and this part was pretty screwed up. :/
Sneak peek of the next story I will be doing when I finish this one:
I woke up with a start and climbed slowly out of bed. It was time to wake up, even if I didn't want to. I had to go on with my daily routine, anyway. I stepped into my bathroom, yawning loudly and stretching as I did. I got out the toothpaste, and brushed. I spat it out and then washed the remainder of the toothpaste out of my mouth with some ice cold water. I didn't have any mouthwash that day. Then, I got ready to do my daily computer routine but before I got to the first website I checked up on, something stopped me.
My curiosity.
And a working title is "A Regular Day"
'hl2.exe has stopped working' never fails to amuse me.
I'm planning a sequel to this called "Game Over" too.
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yay
Also, the story that involved Scout was the sequel to Mission: Improbable?
"Are you some kind of mind reader?" -Sandy Cheeks, local resident of Bikini Bottom, Texan
Just a short chapter to keep this story fresh.
Also, yay Spy quotes!
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Wait until the next part.
That'll be the biggest doozy of all doozies.
1820897 Da, this will work.
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I think I might do it sometime Christmas. Maybe, Christmas Eve, Christmas Day or Boxing Day.
1826363 But it haves to be before 21/12/12, which is tomorrow!
(I love the 2012 apocalypse jokes)