justified with empty words, the party just gets better and better
rainbow dash attempts to put her feelings into words, something that's a lot harder than it sounds.
a short story that was formed half out of writers block and half out of my own experiences
thank you in advance for reading this. it means the world to me.
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11136642
this story started out as a joke. i was like, "what if i got through my writers block by writing about it" and i just kind of built on it from there. i based a lot of the story on things that i've felt/gone through in the past
It’s unbelievable!
It’s a really touching letter.
I adore your writing style and this story!
11153680
thank you
What a beautiful tale.
The Wonderbolts are an elite flying group and just as she had to acknowledge, their routines put massive strain on their bodies. As with any career in any physically demanding field, she would be able to squeeze a couple of years out, maybe a decade or so, before the consequences of such a lifestyle would start to catch up to her. At that point, she either resigns herself to a sideline job, maybe something in administration or rookie training or whatever, or she denies the truth and keeps pushing herself until she eventually breaks. I can't see her enjoy the former, and I can't see her friends letting the latter happen.
Dropping the 'Bolts for AJ? Oh yes, I can totally see that happening. I even like to think it's not a question of 'if', but 'when'. And I can't imagine that AJ isn't aware of that. Rainbow always had a tendency to be a little bit more shortsighted. As far as my opinion is concerned, same can't be said about AJ. Because of that, I would actually love to see this story's other side. See how AJ is doing, how she's dealing with this.
I'm glad you managed to push through your writer's block. This story turned out great.
Thank you.
11156654
if i can come up with any good ideas for it, i might make a follow-up from aj's point of view.
thank you for the feedback.