When a brony from Minnesota suddenly finds himself in Equestria, he'll have to adapt to the sudden changes in the environment, and himself, if he's to fit in. As his new-found friends attempt to lead him home, a unknown force in Equestria seeks him out, a force so powerful, the Elements of Harmony cannot alone stop them.
Well, not without a little help...
First story ever written, and I would appreciate anything you noticed that should be changed, reviews, etc if you could please.
All other categories will be edited as the story progresses, same with characters.
Enjoy!
Chapters (7)
epic.
he wrote this story! LIKE A BAWS!
Hmmm.
Yes. I think I will keep an eye out for this one. Keep it going.
very nice indeed
Excellent
This cult is very interesting. For some reason, I get the impression the leader is Fluttershy.
Keep posting.
great
i think it might be luna because of everything being dark and the purple lightning, but then that might be twilight honestly i don't really know.93363
cruel, cruel destiny. why such a harsh life
i had the impression that the leader is twilight
following
I am waiting for the next chapter,
even though nothing is wrong I feel like saying, YODA quote," A disturbance, I feel in the air."
Thanks everyone for the positive comments!
I'm hoping to get this as much done as possible before school starts up again. As soon as it does (First week of January, cant tell exact date), you can expect the chapters to appear much slower than before.
Also, I cant help but notice that you are attempting to guess who the leader of the cult is. I dont want to give it away (what's the fun in that?), but I dont want to try to give a hint either, fearing that I would give away too much information. Just stick with your ideas, and you will find out soon enough!
Very nice story plan. I'd appreciate more?
same :)
Oh, for...
Amnesia as a plot device? Really?
Well, at least he either doesn't have it that badly, or is faking it.
i.imgur.com/cEPMf.png
FORESIGHT.
I IMAGINED him to be blue. O3O
Freaky, right?
Best. Read. Ever.
5 stars, man.
Tracking.
>>Rōzu
Are you a wizard?
I found it out..... the leader of that cult is "The leader of the cult"...ain't it?
107192
...How did you know!? It was supposed to be a surprise...
NIGHTMARE CULT!!!!!!! NIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHTMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARE
WANT.
Excellent
The word "experiment" still fills me with images of straps and the medic with random needles filled with horrible, terrible things.... *shudder*
Fluttershy the Medic
http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/1644/
so... where did you get that information on celestia and discord's past?
most people describe regular ponies as 3-4 feet tall so luna is my guess
why can't these things be true it would be amazing
125383
It was a comic called Discordantly by crappyunicorn on deviantart
http://crappyunicorn.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=discord#/d4a9wnp
>>DS
That's quite true. Although I saw the video before the comic itself. It is an amazing story.
127336 ok, but do you realize, no matter how good a story that makes, just how unlikely it is that that's exactly what happened right? the way you've presented it here makes it seem like that was something one of the creators for the show said instead of it being one of the most logical fan theories, other than that, this is rather well written, but because of that I'll have to subtract half a star from my rating of this story, which may be earned back with future chapters so... you get 4 stars
fantastic
This was a great chapter.
I honestly thought the mare was Fluttershy at first. 
Pro: Great fighting scene, and I loved the part where he was describing how her voice sounded.
Con: If he's a brony, why wasn't he able to recognize her voice?
Other than that, I think this chapter was great. You shouldn't change anything, that just slightly confused me. Maybe it was because he was confused and in pain from his fight, so he couldn't think straight. (That's just what I thought
)
Wonderous chapter. Very sad, almost made me shed an unmanly tear.
(I'm not a boy. 
)
have no more by any changue?Not...on of Derpy...
TROY I can't wait to read the next chapter tomorrow!!!!!
<3 Jackie
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
YES. I HAVE BEEN WAITING.
164497
Well then, I hope you find it to your liking!
Shouldn't this also be like a romance?
So cute!!!! They're in love!!!!!
169348
Oh, right. Forgot I was going to add that tag in later, then never did...
OH MY GOSH!!!! Celetia's and Discord's story always makes me cry.... And it seems like Twilight and Cameron have a 'Love/Hate relationship'.
To all current followers of "Not In Minnesota Anymore",
At the moment, I am planning one writing one last chapter before putting the story on hiatus. During the hiatus, I will be writing another story before continuing NIMA (Not In Minnesota Anymore). Also, thanks for being so patient with the story!
School and my procrastination habit are surely not helping with producing more chapters...