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LuckyMagic
I'm a young Spanish writer that loves writting, I was fan of MLP since the 15. I love the dark novel and my stories are not for everyone. I wish you like reading it as I love writting it.
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Good opening on how young the girls and Spike were when they first met. I look forward to seeing what awaits them all
** Warning, potential spoilers **
I put out an warning, in case my "analysis" for your stories' summary might unintentionally spoil something.
Alright then;
So basically, Planet Equus/Equis or the World of Equestria is tragically destroyed by this unknown evil and his/her/their Seven Loyal "Servants" that are ironically based on the Seven Deadly Sins; ( Pride/Vanity, Wrath/Rage, Greed/Avarice, Lust, Gluttony, Sloth, and Envy. ) help to achieve that?
And our heroic Mane Six, AND Spike are somehow reincarnated on Earth? Not to mentioned that some of their previous family members and friends/allies from the old world of Equestria might also be lucky to be reincarnated with them as well?
Along with the 12 elemental theme of Fire, Water and Ice, Earth/Soil, Air/Wind/Storm, Life/Nature, Death, Magic, Technology/Tech., Light, Dark, and Time.
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Thanks for the gramatical correction. The automatic writing is what it has hahaha. And yeah, more or less your spoilers is right except for some things. But the description is good hahaha.
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You will not have to wait so long hahaha
The fact that this is partially inspired by Mauroz's active work "La Magica de la Amisad" (forgive me for the misspellings) definitely has me interested with how you are taking this. I will definitely be tracking this story.
Pretty obvious, but I have to confirm--the other names listed are referring to Apple Bloom (Amelie), Sweetie Belle (Mary), Scootaloo (Kate), and Big Macintosh (Marcus)? Also, it is interesting Zeypher Breeze, or whoever his human name in this is the older brother of Fluttershy instead of the younger brother and that Pinkie actually lives with Applejack in this. Definitely interesting...
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Yeah hahaha, in this universe this are their Real names, the names of the show are their nicknames that they earn through the years (my favorite nickname is Big Mac, you will know why in the 2°part of the chapter) and yeah, also Zeypher in this universe is the old brother and his real name will be reveal in future chapters. Also, why Pinkie is with the Apples? Well, lets say that many things happens in this universe and also, because is the cousin of Applejack, they are family releated hahaha
What’s the Mauroz Comic about?
And that show really was amazing man. I'm so pissed the fact that they really have a good ending.
Awesome work. Spike is such an eccentric inventor to the point his inventions and experiments nearly get him killed. And it's funny how everyone is used to that fact. And the girls really do care about him. Twilight, Fluttershy, and Rarity care even more. And while it's nice Spike's dad retired from the force to be closer to Spike and his mom, he really should've chosen someone better to be successor than Iron Will who is just a corrupt cop.
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This will be at the same level as Under the purple Hood 💜
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Why are you so pissed that they got a "good" ending?
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It's an alternative universe where the main 6 are humans and they become heroes and fight agains a group of supervillians... a shonen, for you to know hahaha is pretty good and the draw its just perfect, I really hope I could draw as Mauroz do, but my talent is writting, not drawing hahaha you can found it in Deviantart. You won't regret it, trust me.
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I watched when I was little and Idk how the dub was in your country... but in Spain... well... the ones who do the dub script they really... REALLY write it under the effects of drugs hahahahahahahhaa
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Adn this is just the second part of the first chapter, just wait what I planned to do, we will go slow and the, this is going to be like a John Wick movie hahaha
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Idk, UTPH is my "masterpiece" and are very different stories, but I hope that you like this story as much as you like the other hahaha
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I think he means a bad ending. Sometimes the translation programs are a pain in the ass hahaha
Studio Ghibli could animate this masterpiece
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He was right in the beginning. I just don't like how it ended the series I mean. We just saw Bobo and his friends clashing against enemies. Without knowing who would win. Not to mention they left with a lot of unanswered questions.
Great job
Spike's really having a bad time at that factory, especially now that Shadow has him. And the bit with the girls was funny. Pinkie doesn't realize it's not Rainbow Dash Twilight and Fluttershy really want
Oh, I hope Spike has something that protects him from fear. Maybe magic, maybe he has a life filled with fear and it doesn't affect him anymore, or another good reason why he ignores Sombra.
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Thanks m8 <3
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That thing that she doesn't realize... I'm not very sure hahaha
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You are not wrong, something has Spike but it's not Magic hahaha
Oh my god.. The song got me excited for this Fanfic
Shit…If Spike’s dealing with the Playtime Co. Toys then he’s in DEEP TROUBLE
That's one quite interesting opening. I'm not gonna lie, you are good at describing attire and locations. I also write some interactive chapters on other site. And I never could describe location or someone's attire with so much details :)
What a good coincidence for Drakes to find the boy right at the same day when they mentioned their desire to have kids. Although it's not said directly, but I can tell that Drakes are infertile. Which is unfortunate. Well, at least now they have someone to give love and care to.
Yeah, a bit suspicious that the orphanage didn't report that Evan ran away. But I guess the orphanage workers simply didn't care about him so didn't bother to report.
Good luck to Evan and 6 girls in their lives. Considering that story was written by LuckyMagic, they're gonna need a lot of luck 🤭
Good chapter. Heh, looks like this Spike is less meticulous in doing inventions than UTPH one. A lot of mistakes that almost get him killed. And all for the name of science! :)
This Drakar family seems to have a lot of power and influence around. After all, the goons from this family can easily enter the police station and take whoever they want from there. Interesting. I can't help but feel curious if Don Bruto from UTPH also has more or less power compared to that family.
Things kinda seem to be going too well for the girls and little boy for now. Looking forward to seeing their lives get complicated. If I recall correctly, this story might have a more dramatic ending than UTPH.
Have a good day, everyone!
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As you said, yeah, this story is going to be like this: more joyfull, more comedy and more "light" till one special chapter that is going to be "beggining of the end" if you want to say like that and that chapter is... The Lam. After that chapter, everything is going to go down, slowly slowly till the last season, and the end is going to be more dramatic than UTPH hahahaha
Also, the Drakkar are not even as powerful as Don Bruto, Drakkar only controls a little territory on Canterlot City, Don Bruto controls an entirely country hahahaha
Lastely, as you can see, the Spike here is less traumatic than the one in UTPH, more funny and more carismatic, but as the meme says: Let me Cook hahahaha (also in the remake version I'm doing of UTPH, his name is Clark Timels and the real name, the name of the Afton Family is Crishtian Paytoll, just a little information for all fans of UTPH story hahaha).
It's funny how a couple of girls seem to be unintentionally hinting on themselves when they talk about which type of girls Spike likes.
Smart and mature Twilight is like: "He likes smart and mature girls."
Fun Pinkie is like: "He needs someone to make him laugh and have adventures."
So the black entity captured Spike not because he's some possible threat, possesses mighty magic powers, all that cliche stuff... Nope :)
He was captured simply so the entity could lure the main targets into the trap.
After all, entity was surprised to see that Spike is somehow protected and it can't feed on his fear.
I'm pretty sure that this Spike also doesn't have magic powers and won't have them (just like the one from UTPH). If Evan had magic powers here, I would have thought that someone kidnapped LuckyMagic and took his place🤣. So there must be something else protecting the boy.
That was nice chapter. Let's see if the girls, who don't even know how to use their powers on basic level, will be able to do anything against that entity.
P.S. Who knows, maybe some of the girls actually are interested not only in men, but in women too😏.