The Covid 19 Pandemic, in the three years of it's existence, people more or less adjusted to the new world, mask mandates where enforced, buildings and people were quarentined, and eventually, a vacine was created. That all came to an end about six months ago, with the discovery of a new variant, the worst yet, one that, unlike the previous variants, robs the infected of their very humanity. And it's getting worse by the day... These are the stories some of the survivors: A teenager, a soldier, an EMT, and a survialist.
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Excerpt from the introduction:
The time it would have taken to run this through a spell check program, would have been well worth it. (Or maybe not. It's not really a MLP fanfic.)
Making a story about the bat stu wu flu is by far one of the stupidest stories I've seen on Fimfiction.
This doesn't belong here.
I found this very interesting, and this looks like a good start to a story, don't let the negatives outweigh the positives.
I haven't read it yet, but this just sounds like pandemic, but with SARS-CoV-2 instead of H1N1
Well there are a lot of inattentive spelling mistakes(mostly homonyms), still a little a bit stilted, the major issue in the writing that I see is that you don't regularly explain what the characters are thinking and feeling in the situation. Punctuation is also an issues with using slightly too many periods instead of comas. One thing that might help you in your writing a lot is if you try to use a text to speech program called Balabolka(yes it's 100% free), where you will pick up homonyms and see pick up on your sentence structures punctuations. Still on a first try you are on a good start, I hope the comment and advice I am giving you will help you in some way. This reminds me a bit of the Alternate Conversion Bureau in the theme. I find it off that the guy risked hugging his parents when he should have known that contact of any kind would make him a risk of also being infected too. keep it up dude.