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Mint Essence


Brony from 2012, fimfic reader from 2014, fimfic writer from 2020

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A small filly wakes up in collapsed cave system, giving her no other choice but to explore her new surroundings, wandering away from all she knows.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 16 )

May i recommend 1000 word chapters? It kinda feels to short otherwise :rainbowhuh:
What a filly? Unicorn? Pegasus or Earthpony?
How do she looks like? Coat color? Mane style? Blank Flank? Long or short coat length?
For all we know it's a pink fluffy unicorn usualy dancing on rainbows... :pinkiesmile:

How can she see? Even Night vision needs some light... Perhaps Mana Crystals glowing on the Cave walls? Altetnative a Thestral could use echo location or a Earth pony use Earth magic to see like that female blind earthbender. Or a Unicorn glowstick spell. Fun fact: Red light preservs Night vision so red light would be the best at the moment.

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That will be revealed later, but she’s a unicorn. Also this is more of a chill story to get me into writing more SFW, it has no clear plot so it could go anywhere, which is the fun of it.

I’m just enjoying it for the ride, nothing complicated, just taking the whole thing chapter by chapter.

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She can hardly seen anything, which is why it takes her so long to get through the cave. Her vision extends a foot or two, and is very weak for now.

short but good! she was lucky to find this place

I'm very confused about that chapter... I feel like i should listen to some 'Hollow Knight' Soundtracks now...

I wonder if she’ll ever find whomever used to occupy that little hole in the wall.

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The story is fine so far it’s a mystery with added speculation on what the little filly is doing. The author doesn’t need to go overboard to explain everything.

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Safe for work, as in no porn or other adult subjects.

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