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For the record, I love Lyra and Bon Bon, just thought I'd mention that. They are without a doubt the cutest background pair.

Comment posted by toastponyfortress deleted Apr 6th, 2013

DAMN :rainbowderp: Even though I wanted a typical good ending (cloppy or not), dat ending made this story all the more powerful. Well played :moustache:

1269169 Thankyou. That kind of was my intention. All over I wanted to see what kind of reactions this sort of story would get, and this is a good one. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_smile.png
1268891 Thankyou, but I hope if this brought tears you were still smiling in the end, otherwise I will feel bad dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png

1269887 Yeah I listened to one of pinkie's songs always cheers me up..but yeah this stuff hits home kinda with some old friends of mine almost doing the same thing..anyways this was good definatly thumbs up worthy

i am so fucking depressed. i was really really hoping for a good end.

Poor Lyra and Bon Bon, such a couple ending like that.

And just when I thought everything would be fine. Still loved it though in a bittersweet way.

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I guess the whole time I was going for a darker ending, or as some would say, bitter sweet. The memories were put in place to help make people become more attached to the pair, so that when the ending came to be, it would have a larger effect. It was slightly depressing to write to be honest, I love these two.

1271184 Oh dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_rainbowderp_flip.png , I hate it when I write a depressing fic and someone's seen that suff go down in real life... Makes me feel like a bad person knowing I might have bought up some bad stuff in their mind dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png

1273219 It's ok dear it's a good story you did nothing wrong so don't fret

1274074 As long as I haven't upset anyone with personal matters than that makes me feel better, and thankyou :pinkiesmile:

Very well written...but still :raritycry:

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reminds me of romeo and juliet ending :D

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Thank you, I'm sorry for tears that came with it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png
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While this wasn't inspired by that, I just noticed because of that comment how Romeo and Juliet-esque it is :derpytongue2:

Anything that can make me :fluttercry: is a good story and even tho this is a fanfic i feel like i know the characters better. Can't wait for you to write some more awesome Fic's

great story, im sad that they died. i am at a loss for words.:fluttershysad:

1367608 It was a rough ending to write, but I'm glad you enjoyed it :pinkiesad2:

1376423 No need for apologies, my good sir. A beautiful piece of work, I say... :moustache:

GODDAMIT WHY PEOPLE ALWAYS WRITE FICS LIKE THIS THAT BRING ME ON THE VERGE OF TEARS AND THEN JUST BEFORE I CRY IT DOESNT SHOW WTF WORLD WHAT. THE. FUCK.
Past Sins was the ONLY fic the ONE AND ONLY FIC that has EVER EVER brought me to tears, and that time i was freaking bawling.:fluttercry: why cant i cry at anything else

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Some of us have a certain line we cross before emotion becomes too much to bear. I hope the feeling didn't annoy you too much dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png

that... was beautiful. thank you for that :pinkiesad2:

Whoever disliked this is going to get their heads ripped off. :facehoof:

Wow I am enjoying this ^^ and someone on youtube requested me to read this fanfic so that's what I did Tough I am doing this one in parts as it is way to big to do in one take xD

and yes Lyra and Bon Bon are the cutest background pair :rainbowkiss:

Keep up the great work dude ^_^ Epic feel time on your part man I know I am gonna really enjoy this fanfic

1704397 Hehe I can't exactly blame them. This story isn't exactly for the faint hearted.

1829878 Oh wow, thanks so much dude. That would have gotten this a good amount of publicity.

I believe this song wraps up the plot of this story. Enjoy System of a Down Question!

I was a bit skeptical when I saw this new chapter, to be honest. And frankly I was content with the ending of the first chapter, making the story a heartbreaking tragedy.

However, this chapter was a fine addition, and I'm happy Bon Bon and Lyra finally got their happy ending. It's good to see that your writing skills are still sharpened, too!

Slendermane, Foalice, new story altogether; whatever it is, I look forward to your next work.

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Hehe I was skeptical writing it, knowing it'd been out for so long, the idea only popped into my head that morning, and I wrote it out and liked it. I too was happy with the original ending, but I felt I could add more, and once I had given a reason for them to be where they ended up, I wanted it to end well for them, rather than with more heartbreak.

Hehe I'm glad you liked it my friend :pinkiehappy: I told you guys I was trying to get back into the writing game hehe.

All those stories will have their updates soon, and Warzone, which I'm currently writing a new chapter to :rainbowkiss:

2387564 Awesome:pinkiehappy:! Looking forward to it!

and did you check out challenge week 3?

2387747 Awesome hehe :twilightsheepish:
Yes I did, I also commented on it :twilightsmile:

Oh Celestia this is a great story!!!!!!

The first ending made my heart skip a beat, and I only had two thoughts.
1. F**king great ending!!!!
2 there has to be more!!!

And yes, there was. Great story, loved it to death.:pinkiecrazy:

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Hehe, glad to hear you liked it :twilightsmile: there wasn't originally meant to be any more than that :p

My hat off to you sir… you made me cry. That is very VERY rare for me :3

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Hehe, thankyou, I'm hoping you enjoyed the story then? :twilightsheepish:

that made me cry I fucking love lyra good job you should do another

This made me cry.this was a nice story

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