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Hello!
Once I got bored and decided to write my first story. I hope it's decent and you will enjoy it (or well...sorry for wasting your time if you didn't)
English is not my first language so I apologize for any grammar and spelling mistakes.

This comic heavily influenced my fic https://derpibooru.org/2465036. I found it quite cute so I wanted to write a story for it.

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Eddy13

Eddy13 #1 · Jan 19th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Pretty good first attempt, but personally I think you should have a proofreader look over it.

Still, I liked the story. I'm familiar with the comic that inspired it.

Comrade_Soviet

Comrade_Soviet #2 · Jan 19th, 2022 · · ·

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Yes a proofreader would be welcomed
But I didnt want to bother anyone for such a spontaneous idea

Appul

Appul #3 · Jan 26th, 2022 · 2 · ·

Very cool fan fiction, despite the fact that he was inspired from a comic book that I saw him recently, I could not even think that someone would make a whole fan fiction on him, so I want to say thank you for that, I really like reading Flutterdash stories.

PatRoison