From Whence We Fell

by iAmSiNnEr

A Darkened Land

The Fallen’s Stars

By iAmSiNnEr

Prologue - A Darkened Land

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Blades clashed.

Sparks flew in the air as alicorns fought, their magic grappling for a hold in their enemy.

The sun and moon hung in the sky, each at one end of the sky.

Monsters on the ground roared challenges at each other, guttural screams piercing the air once in a while.

Ponies hid away, cowering in fear as the gods did battle.

Equestria was no more. The alicorns had fallen, and nothing good remained.

There was no ruler of the land. There was no Harmony.

All there was left were gods, eternally fighting each other.

Gods, and monsters.

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Comments

[Grey_skies]

Well that was bleak, but at the same time awesome and a great way to hook a reader

[Oreng Pingvin]

break, break, we are millionaires

[Super Ponyman]

Wonderful Hook chapter. Short, established a setting with quick description. Leaves curiosity to drag us onwards.

[Bicyclette]

very epic start!