This story is officially and now completely canceled. I was thinking about doing a rewrite but after going through the entire piece, the only thing even worth salvaging is our lovely CA pony. Which is why that she will be the only thing I'll keep. If you want to read the story still, go for it. But it won't be edited or changed or such from what is currently on there (I haven't checked in ... a long while). I know it's bad of me, but it is what it is. Hopefully the horrible writing and countless issues don't detract from my next story (when ever that will be).
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Steel has been in the Lunar Guard for months, working hard and doing all the right things. He gets the chance of the lifetime to prove himself for the Commanders. However, all dreams come with a cost and sometimes even worse, nightmares.
Cover Art is a work in Progress. Current picture is of a main character.
I would love to hear it from everypony! So please leave comments on what ya like and don't like, the more criticism the better!
I want to thank my good friend Coffee (Canvas Shade) for providing art for my story and reviewing/editing my story. I will be changing over editors for my other chapters due to his popularity based off his ongoing adventure. (Seriously, its a great story, so go read it!) (Link > http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45880/Committed%21- )
I remember when this was originally just a paragraph long mini story idea me or another (I forget now) brought to you. You pursued that idea further, grew and improved on it, and look at it now. You gonna submit it to Equestria Daily?
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I plan on submitting it when I complete the first story, whether or not it is after my next or final chapter, I really don't know. It mostly depends on how often I hand write my story and when I get my laptop situation fixed.
Looking good so far, Blue! Story, picture, and all!
1431387 Thanks Coffee... you totally knew the first chapter before everyone else did... but now you are in the dark! ... until you read it ... We still totally need to work on the cover art for this story and the next xD
Starting to read.....
Let's see what happens in next installment of this fic if you're working on this still.
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You know, I really wanted to continue this... but I had so many computer issues when I began the third chapter that it just turned me away from writing it. I still have the plot and everything saved, I even hand wrote the beginning of the third chapter. Now that I have my super secret awesome story that I am working on (and has many flaws still) I kinda don't really wanna write anything else but that one ya know? Which is really a shame because this story had so much potential. I loved the characters to death (Especially General Ore, who would have been introduced in the third chapter) but, it's just kinda... dead now. I am really thinking about just making this story into a one-shot, and being done with it, (obviously, different outcomes with the characters).
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Oi, if I can give you all the cookies in the world, I would!
This is EXACTLY what I needed 6 months ago! Needless to say, the story completely needs a re-write. I have by far learned from my mistakes, but no-one really pointed them out to me... Right now though, this story is way in the back burner, and but it definitely did have potential (I think). I really should have used vampony, and I am surprised I didn't. I may start the re-write shortly if you think it is worth a re-write. Whether or not I turn it into a one-shot is a whole nother story. But seriously... thank you SO MUCH!
I also messaged you showing, why it is in the backburner, and just how much my writing has improved... (You'd be surprised, I know I am!)! Anywho, ya... thank you so much!