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Tell me more of what lies beyond here.


Written as a gift for garatheauthor. Edited and preread by The Red Parade and Snow Quill.

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Comments ( 3 )

Oh fuck this hit me just as hard the second time reading as it did the first. The imagery here is absolutely beautiful and just, I can’t express how much I loved reading this. So short and sweet and with an ending that is really impactful. Amazing job here

“What is it to love?”

“Being able to see you everyday, Coco.”

These two quotes speak to me so much. I loved this, it's short, it's vivid, the imagery is excellent. Short and sweet doesn't do it justice but really, excellent work.

An interesting take, rice, and very powerful imagery. A sort of twist on ice-and-fire - I like it. Excellent job.

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