• Member Since 7th May, 2012
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ChaoticHarmony


Hey guys! I write sadfics and sadfic accessories! Oh, and I also do comedy things. Yeah. Feel free to check out my stuff! And I hope you enjoy whichever story of mine you happen to be on! ^^

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How does it feel to take care of one who cares for others?

Nurse Healing Smile is a simple nurse in the back-end town of Ponyville, which finds itself an active disaster zone on a weekly, if not daily, basis. "It's all fun and games until a pony gets hurt." the old saying goes, and it brings Nurse Healing Smile to grips with the very same question.

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Comments ( 18 )

very moving :) thank you

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OP

It had an amazing message and ACORNYMS!! :pinkiecrazy:

1278792 Calm down now bro, don't get your panties in a bunch.

1279044 Caps are not to be used all the time, no matter what your user is. And the swearing every other word, c'mon now. Don't be such a child and express your opinion as a civilized human.

1278617 Thank you for reading it! :twilightsmile:

1278771 Oh you :twilightsheepish:

1279064

Who are you talking to? :rainbowhuh:

1279662 Someone I deleted a comment from.

1279667

What did he say?

AND WHAT IS HIS NAME SO CHAOS MAY BEFALL HIM!! :flutterrage:

1279686 The guy just be trolling. I don't care for it though.

I may read this with Mando's song playing in the background...
(for youtube I mean)

it’s a pound of it taken from the pony your helping.”

You're. Fix it. (I hate those your - you're mistakes.)


IMHO it's not your best sadfic. Overly vague in some places with not enough detail to follow it without being very confused.

1280797 Please note the author's note on the top. Thank you for finding the error though.

1280886 Author's note taken into effect. I don't see how it's much different from how you usually write.

1281014 It's freaking FIRST PERSON?

1281029 I'm pretty sure that you've written in first person before... I think.

1281039 Once. Only once. That hardly constitutes what I "usually write like"

1281072 Oh. Hrmm. Well... good luck with first person then (you might want to be more descriptive when writing first person. When reading first person you want to feel a bit like the person, or pony in this case.)

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