A blind, teenage stallion wanders into the everfree forest and meets a carnivorous creature known as a Kelpie.
Will he survive this chance encounter? And if so, what of his relationship with this mysterious being?
I think the real question is whether or not he know's what he might be getting himself into.
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What does Kelphie looks like?
1268318 Well, in mythology, a kelpie usually looks like a normal horse, I believe. They tempt children nearby to climb on their back, but their coat is adhesive, so the kelpie drags them to the bottom of a body of water where they devour them. That's roughly the lore, I think.
In this instance, I'd assume it'll look like a normal pony.
1268519 well in some of the lore they are also known to be shapeshifters.
to anyone reading! i could really use an editor if somebody wants to help me out with that.
It's nice that you're added a creature from a different folklore then what we have in the fandom/canon universe. I'll be looking forward to seeing how it develops as you have the main character blind which will be interesting for the first encounter with the creature in question. Hope it turns out well for you man.
1269287 thanks bro! i'm also hoping it'll turn out well.
looks good. but, he seems to be a tad bit idiotic.
1949802 but those are the best kind of protagonists!
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Some sources say they have smaller ears than regular horses/ponies, and/or have seaweed/snakes in their mane (that might be describing a different water horse creature though).
4542790 All we know is, he's called the Stig!
So...I guess there is no further plans on continuing this story, eh?
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The Kelpie?
Okay so....I'm gonna continue this f**king story! I don't even care if it's dead or not, i'm doing this for myself. There where a number of reasons why i stopped writing, but nothing big to worry about. I needed my life in order and whatnot. But if there are any people out there who may be interested in this story, it shall be revived in due time.
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I might be interested.
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