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SuperPinkBrony12


I'm a brony and a Pinkie Pie fan but I like all of the mane six, as well as Spike. I hope to provide some entertaining and interesting fanfics for the Brony community.

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(Story idea requested by JBlaser on Fanfiction.net. Takes place before the time skip in "The Last Problem".)

Rarity and Rainbow Dash have been dealing with a lot of problems related to their professions, problems that have been keeping them awake at night. And for both of them that presents a real problem.

Hoping to quickly resolve it, both mares seek out Zecora. But they accidentally take the wrong potions home with them, giving them unusual dreams.

Even Princess Luna will be shocked by how powerful these dreams are, and the solution to ending both will have to come from an unlikely place. Can Rarity and Rainbow Dash complete the tasks given to them, or are they doomed to live their worst nightmares over and over again?

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Once again, great job on the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up in all the right places. Can certainly understand why certain circumstances could lead to Rainbow and Rarity both having recurring nightmares. And, yeah, even though they each accidentally grabbed the wrong potions, Rainbow's fashion-based nightmare was a good G3 Mythology Gag. Also appreciated the help Luna gave them both.

Anyway, good first one-shot of the New Year and I'm definitely looking forward to more of your work in general.

Rarity nodded. "Which is why I'm hopeful Zecora can brew up something that'll fix our problems," Then, recalling one of her previous experiences she added. "I just hope she remembers to label her bottles properly this time."

Yeah she could have label down maybe it won't be a big huge problem

The fashionista chuckled. "I'm sure Zecora learned from that little mishap. I just hope she's home, Applejack mentioned she was going to stay behind in her homeland for a while. Something about reconnecting with her old friends."

Oh yeah that's right I remember reading that comic it was still kind of cool that we got to see her Village and not just zebra but also different other creature that's pretty cool

What neither pony knew or realized was that they had in fact grabbed the wrong bottles. To be fair "Rarity" and "Rainbow Dash" both started with the same two letters, so it was easy to mix them up when both mares were more than a bit exhausted. They soon began to dream, unaware of the mix-up that had occurred.

Oh gosh darn it history repeats itself again probably do cutie marks next or at least a doodle of them since there's other creatures in Ponyville now

So apparently Rarity and Rainbow dash having trouble sleeping because they have a lot of work to do Spitfire promoted rainbow to become one of the leader of the Wonderbolts and Rarity has so much dresses to make even with sassy and Coco's help it could still be a little overwhelming so they decided to ask Zecora if they have any potion to have them to go to sleep she learned a lesson to put a label on them but unfortunately it was in letters but just only one letter which both of them start with R so they got the potion mixed up and they ended up each other's dreams rainbow making dresses and rarity in the Wonderbolts Luna told them only way to wake up from The Nightmare they had to complete a task reluctantly they both did it and surprisingly they did a pretty good job especially the third one which they thought it was the most impossible thing they just had to learn how to believe in them self and how they can make and on their own way and despite that they did it and finally woke up what they learn from each other what they go through and everything so that's a pretty good lesson this was a pretty good one keep up the good work

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