Like A Diamond Drawn To The Sun

Rarity is holding onto some feelings. She feels she has to share them to let them go.

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applejackofalltrades

applejackofalltrades #1 · Dec 25th, 2021 · · ·

Very in character and I could practically read it in her voice. This one drips with emotion that is real. Very nicely done

Sunlight Rays

Sunlight Rays #2 · Dec 25th, 2021 · · ·

Fuck, this... this story really made me feel things. Like, feel it from the bottom of the heart. Right now I'm trying to push that damned organ back down my throat, and yet it's profusely stubborn. Rarity's emotion really bleeds through the words here, and it stabs me in all the right spots.

Thanks for writing this.

Glamour Gleam

Glamour Gleam #3 · Dec 25th, 2021 · · ·

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Feelings are a strange thing, you see? You can’t explain them, you can’t make sense of them; at least not entirely. You know why they exist, you know what they do, but you simply can’t control them or know why they won’t go away,

I can't put it into better words than what I did there. Thank you for taking the time to read this.

Emotion Nexus

Emotion Nexus #4 · Dec 25th, 2021 · 1 · ·

This letter just screams Rarity. Every word feels like she's choking back tears and it's amazing how well that was conveyed. This was a very real letter, no matter how you look at it. Wonderful story.

Undome Tinwe

Undome Tinwe #5 · Jan 4th, 2022 · 1 · ·

That was beautiful. The joyful melancholy in this whole piece makes it feel so poignant, and you really conveyed Rarity's feelings very well throughout this whole piece.

UnderTheBed