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Starlight and Trixie Direct a Play

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Twilight called Starlight into her office for an important assignment: direct the Hearth's Warming play at the School of Friendship. Good thing her best friend is an expert in show business.

Written for [Moosetasm] for Jinglemas 2021

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Moosetasm

Moosetasm #1 · Dec 25th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Very nice! Thank you for the story!

Selene Bright

Selene Bright #2 · Dec 27th, 2021 · · ·

A cute little story.

your dialog and characterization were great. But I think this story could have used a few hijinks to make it more interesting though.

NeirdaE

NeirdaE #3 · Dec 28th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Oh, sure. It was rushed. I could have added in a few more examples of Starlight helping with rehearsing, and Trixie doing more effects.
Early ideas also included Rarity and Trixie trying to out-drama each other for the role of Princess Platinum. But I couldn't quite figure out how to make that fit without including the rest of the Mane Six.

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