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DougtheLoremaster


You can't give up your laughter, cause you're scared of a little pain~. Writing to relieve PTSD. Enjoy my misery <3 you all. Discord: dougtheloremaster

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On the island of Celestia Nui, legends tell of six brave and mighty Ponies who will awaken the Great Spirit; Celestia and banish the shadows. Join them as they find their masks, unlock their power, and utilize the elements to defeat Nightmare; Celestia's sister, and allow the sun to shine once more.


This is a Bionicle/Mlp fusion crossover.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 18 )

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I'm not sure if Spike (who hasn't been mentioned once in story) even exists yet. I am still mulling an idea...but it is highly unlikely Spike will become a Toa, though not impossible; I just can't see how he would be anything sentinent aside from a Shadow/Rahi. Especially in a world of Ponies. Dragons, Griffons...etc...simply don't exist in a fantasy scenario of sentient life. Maybe as Rahi and enemies...Changelings will technically exist, but not as love eaters.

TL;DR: Nothing concrete at the moment.

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He could start as a matoran then become a dragon when he becomes a toa.

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Takua started as a chronicler of the Toa's adventures.

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As stated previously Dragons do not exist in this world. Whether or not Spike exists at all, will remain to be seen. Nothing is concrete yet, involving him.

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Takua is already played by Sunset Shimmer I believe. Jaller; captain of the guard is Starlight, though the Toa inika are a long way away from being introduced. These are Tahu, Gali etc...not even Nuva forms yet. Not to mention the metru/ hordika...I have plans...but we will see how well this one is received. Dragons do not exist, nor do Griffons except maybe as Rahi forms...will think on that.

I love the story so far, keep it up! But I will give you a bit of a warning though, with what I would assume is one of your OCs as the cover art (correct me if I'm wrong), just be prepared for unwarranted hate to come at you for it here as I (though not yet revealed), have a black and red OC and have seen firsthand how seriously this site takes its unspoken rules about OCs, so just be careful. (I know this may be a comment that you wouldn't expect, but I just want to give you a heads up before the storm).

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Not an OC of mine, just the cover and it depicts Twilight (as described) as the Toa of Fire. Thank you for that warning though. My only OC is my Pfp. Glad you are enjoying my tale of bionicle/pony fusion.

Good start, I can see the parallels.

The regions are called Wahi, Koro refers to the villages themselves. For example, Ko-Koro was located in Ko-Wahi and inhabited by the Ko-Matoran.

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Knew I was forgetting something. It's been a dozen or so years since I delved deep into the lore like this, so hope you'll pardon the error. I'll fix that right up as soon as I can possibly in a few hours. Thank you for that correction.
Edit: fixed.

Crossover.... eh... what game/movie/anime/cartoon are you using? I don't see in the description.

So I'm making a wild guess here that spike is meant to be Maku?

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She is actually meant to be Hali. Though I have a bit of artistic liberty with her (Spike) as a chronicler. I do have a good reason, however, and I hope you stick around. If this goes over well, I have plans for the various generations, though that is well away for now.

Im loving this story so far, i was too young ti get into bionicle when it came out, but the lore is some of the best storytelling ive seen in a while. And this fic is no different. I cant wait tk see where it goes.

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