Once a week I will write a new random and comedic MLP FiM story. It will always be a different story sometimes I will write a new story on Monday sometimes it will be on Tuesday I hope you enjoy regardless.
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A humongous improvement from some of your previous stories...Good job, try reading good fics to get the feel of a nice story. Don't worry a lot of new writers will improve only in terms of writing, your ideas and stories have good plots
Two, why is this comedy?
One, why.
Three, how is this comedy?
Rarity-not British.
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Ever since I first watched the show in Summer 2011 she's always sounded British to me and my friend Josh.
Huge improvement. The writing and grammar are mostly perfectly readable, and the prose flows much better than before. I don't know how Fimfiction thought I disliked this before. I never saw it.
And it seems this is pretty old. If you can write like this everytime then I'll sure you'll become a decent author!
For once, you'll earn my favorite after I'm done reading.
2683924 Thank you if I remember correctly the first chapter/ story in this series was when I asked someone to help me write the story.
Why is this tagged Cancelled? If it's just random shorts and you're no longer adding more, wouldn't that make it Complete? Do you just not like them and want to deter people from reading them?
Why is this tagged Cancelled? If it's just random shorts and you're no longer adding more, wouldn't that make it Complete? Do you just not like them and want to deter people from reading them?