After a strange breakup, Feather Bangs meets Flash Sentry under unusual circumstances.
This story was written for Hearthswriting as a gift for Nailah.
Thanks to Bicyclette for feedback on this story.
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I like this pairing. The melancholic feel of it and the joint bonding over a lack of emotion between break-ups was really neat. I like the bonding though go through and the ambiguous ending of a happy ending for both of them. I also enjoyed the comedy of Flash really pushing the "it's not illegal, I swear angle!" since it honestly just makes the entire circumstance that much worse.
A fun read, thank you kindly!
Okay, this was brilliant. I loved the way the title connected into the whole theme of the story, pining for lost loves. And while it's only just being hinted at with the end, the notion of Flash Sentry and Feather Bangs is a classic case of himbo twink shipping that's bloody brilliant. I love it.
And good grief was the characterization on point. Flash being genuine but not the smartest, Feather Bangs being morose in his depression but at the same time having the wherewithal to snark at Flash... it's great.
I really like the idea that Feather Bangs just falls for ponies all over the place. Feels a little like how I was once upon a time... and in some ways still can be.
(I don't have crushes on many of my friends what're you talking about.)Also the idea of Flash having to buy a Twilight figurine under the table all sneaky like and probably spending at least ten times its actual value is hysterical. Well done there.
Really just... this was awesome.
This is what I needed today - a nice, pleasant meet and greet between two ponies. No drama, no action, just a nice flowing story about ponies.
I see some schmucks are tossing downvotes around for no reason. Screw em.
This was a very sweet little story, I liked it. Convenient for the rest of us that we get to enjoy a gift for Nailah free of charge
That was pretty cute. In universe, I wonder if ponies realize how marketable their designs are, and if so, just how big figurines based on important figures are. It was pretty nice how Feather and Flash just kind of vibed together, rather than either really trying to hit on the other.
oof! that is quite the evidence
i feel like this is not the best description to give to someone if you want them to find you in a diner lol
hehe good meta-joke. also, understandable misspeaking!
i mean these are good words to motivate someone to break out of their depression-induced apathetic routine, if only once!
aww yay Flash Sentry’s in this!
this would sound sarcastic from many ponies but not from Flash Sentry
so true actually
oh that is so Flash!
i mean, relatable? who doesn’t just like the princesses?
yay title drop
aww! this is a fun dynamic that i don’t see too often in M/M stories! (or maybe i don’t read them enough? but then i have read two contests’ worth at least…) but yes, wacky Flash Sentry bringing adventure and spontaneousness to a depressed and gray Feather Bangs’s life, love it!