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Doesn't Steve only have two e's in it?
11093022
Well It can be written in many form, the one i was taught was with three e's, making it : Steeve.
Oh my i love the cover art💛😍
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Yeah
T.F.A.N.C.S is a pretty good artist, you should look at his other piece of work if you didn't already (heads up tho there is nsfw)
Okay then. Item one is that your spelling and grammar leave quite a lot to be desired. Misspelled words, missing commas, no capitalization of words where it is needed, etc. I would hire an editor. Furthermore, I cannot tell if the person described is Human or Pony. This needs work but it has potential. Fluttershy's mannerisms, demeanor, and speech patterns all seem to be spot-on, so good job on that.
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Thanks for the advices.
For the whole misspelling and overall grammar i sincerly apologies, being french makes it a bit hard to write like this.
I'll be honest for the editor part : i'm both broke and a cheapskate so it might be hard, i've mainly started this on a whim because i couldn't find something interesting to read, so i went full on thanos and said "fine, i'll do it myself then".
The character is a human turned pony, but he kept many quirk from his previous form : such as always wearing clothes and using only his hindlegs to walk from time to time (old habits dies hard and the hability to use his front hooves to wield thing is something he outright refuses to let go). If it the size part that confuses you, try to picture him taller than bic mac whilst still shorter than luna.
Thanks for reading anyway, have a good one pal.
11121949 If you cannot afford to hire one, there is a Group on this site dedicated to helping writers find editors. I found mine by asking my readers of any of them would be willing to do it and surprisingly some did. My current editor is another author and he is GOOD. I'm just trying to say that you have options to help you out. Best of luck to you.
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I'll look into it, thanks for that