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[2nd person] [You x Fluttershy]
When you realise that you have feelings for Fluttershy you struggle to come to terms with these feelings and end up going to each of her friends in turn for advice to get some perspective on the situation. Can you overcome the humiliation and pain of your past and tell the mare just how you feel?

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 28 )

Hmm looks interesting, added to read later list

im likeing it! Sould prove intresting

It needs some proofing. Some word choices are a little unusual, for example "You stop to pause for a minute". It would be better if you either stopped or paused. The ideas are fine but a little proofing would help a lot. :eeyup:

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Thanks for noticing that :rainbowlaugh:
Im off to bed right now but I will make changes tomorrow.

No way, I had an idea with that same picture in mind! :raritycry: darnnit...lol o well i will read this later...


Edit: Yes this seems like it would be a good D'aww story, i like it i would love it if you were to continue this story.:twilightsmile:

More! :) plz

It is now off my read later list and on my fav list:twilightsmile: cant wait for more

This interests me. Go on...

I can't help but think this would be the perfect theme for this story

Please continue.. :pinkiesmile:

More. Right now.

this is a very good fanfic.
and i would love it if you continued it

w-w-why would you say it was moving too fast? I enjoyed it before that ending of this chapter completely ruined it, congrats, instead of romance it should be sad... YOU MADE FLUTTERSHY CRY YOU MONSTER.:fluttercry:

I'm sorry but i cannot enjoy this so long as the ending stays that way.

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Fear not, more is coming. I just need to get some free time to actually sit down and write. Things will be explained in the next chapter.

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there is justice in the world! i already thumbed up anyway, once fluttershy is cured of sadness i shall fav. until then, YOU MONSTER xD

Continue dammit! I can't leave her in tears like that!

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I will I promise! I just need to find the time to actually sit down and write :unsuresweetie:

1437375 Well by all means, take your time. :twilightsmile: I was just willing to continue the story myself if offered. I've never seen a romance story start off like that. It's unique, it just leaves a bad taste in one's mouth if that was it. :applejackunsure:

Looking forward to more. won't say anything beyond that because it'd be a pot-meet-kettle kind of stuation. (I'm waaaaay behind on my current fic, and I have others brewing behind it.)

I don't know if she's OOC or not. She does give a protective sister/friend type of vibe, and I'd imagine she would get upset if someone hurt one of her siblings or friends.

ITS ALIVE!!!!! Now to read

EDIT: well, that was good, i hope its not going to take that long for the next chapter

Thank you for this story. Realy thank you, because I secretlly have had this crush on flutter...
Nevermind. Either way thank you, keep up the good work.:twilightsmile::heart::heart:

“I- mean, I didn’t- Oh my” She stuttered.

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Applejack should become a psychologist at this point. :applejackunsure:
I mean, in almost all fanfiction she's the person who helps fix problems the most.
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It's almost like i can't wait for the sequel

Are you going to finish this???

Oh, what is this? A romance story that isn't a cheap perverted clopfic? A story that is written decently and actually convinces me there is any semblance of actual romance involved rather than the human just wanting to stick his shaft inside a pony?

I am shocked, and also very relived. THIS is how a romance story is written. Or at the very least it's a good example how one is anyway.

This gets a like and a watch. Because I'm sick of seeing clopfics all over the damn place and this story comes as a breath of fresh air to me.

I am now saddened to know that this story will never be completed.:fluttercry:

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