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Pretty good to me! The story is solid.
Still amazing
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Thanks.
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Got anything more? I'd really like your full thoughts on what you paid for.
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Honestly, that IS my full thoughts.
Just a great story that I don't have much to say about.
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I suppose that's fair. I'm just glad this is out for more people to see.
Haha, rainbow dash tentacles.
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That's not a bad idea.
Love your work
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Good stuff
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Quite good. Especially liked Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle pressing their teats together and then feeling Rainbow’s bulge inside the other. And also the moment when Scootaloo winked.
Though that was sadly the only winking in the story. Would have been really nice to see the others winking, too. Including Rainbow. I guess I was also really hoping to see Scoots get a taste of Rainbow’s pussy during the big orgy… You made a point that her pussy was still there, but it sadly got no use whatsoever. (Sequel where Rainbow accidentally impregnates herself by cumming in Scootaloo’s mouth and then getting eaten out by her?)
I guess I also wanted a bit more body descriptions. That was pretty good in the first chapter, but really fell off in the second. Would have been nice to see them exploring each other’s bodies a bit more.
Oh, and for Pony’s sake — please stop using the word “appendage”!
Still, though, this was a great story, and probably would have been a lot more popular if it had a good cover image!
Oh, and one more thing — Sweetie Belle was cooking!?!? Even without her getting distracted, that’s a recipe for everything to become burnt mush!
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*Whistle* I wasn't expecting to get a comment from a high-profile poster like you. Thanks so much.
And sorry for neglecting those details. The priority was getting the stuff the commissioner wanted.