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It feels like her whole world has been turned upside-down in a matter of minutes.

Her wife’s natural magic encourages regular, polite, boring ponies to abandon all reason and politeness and personal space to start feeling her up, at least until they get used to it.

Their daughter has inherited that same magic, that same aura—and those same consequences.

That same daughter enjoys the attention, and is regularly cuddling with, making out with, and possibly even sleeping with strangers without any concern for the consequences.

Her wife takes care of their daughter’s intimate needs when they threaten to overwhelm her.

“Oh, hey, dear,” Cadance mutters, slipping into the nearest secret doorway. “Just thought you should know I’ve been going down on our daughter when she gets horny from all the strangers groping her.”

Worst of all—neither of them saw fit to tell her about any of this!

As fun and enjoyable the sex has been. The mystery in this story haves me totally hook.

Why doesn't Cadance tell Shining the truth about everything? He already knows about the constant sexual harassments and abuse she goes through every single time. So why bother keeping it all a secret from him. He’s already worried out of his mind about her, so whats the point.

No doubt she really doesn't want him to know how much she really wants to let others have their way with her. Thanks to Flurry we know that their love magic is a double-edge sword. Everyone wants to fuck her and she wants to fuck them.

She must be trying so hard to hold herself back and not betray Shining.

Also, what makes Shining so special? How come he’s not effected by her natural magic? Sure we seen other ponies who aren't, but they’re clearly holding back. So they're not immune to it like Shining is.

I’m looking forward to seeing all the truths come out.

I'd upvote this story a second time if I could.

Honestly, while your sex scenes are incredible, it's the subtle bits of worldbuilding and numerous unsolved plot hooks that really make this story stand out. Ember wants to be bred by a unicorn? Cadance has a lust aura that she has trouble controlling? Chrysalis is locked up in the basement for some reason? These make it seem like this is an entire world, one which we're just glimpsing a small part of, and that's even more seductive than Sugar and Spice.

Barely.

I think you did really well with this chapter, the way she slowly got corrupted through constant teasing is great. I really want to see where this goes.

A couple things you could have done with the mini skirt. Spice could have used it to clean up his member bit, though I do like that he pumped into Shiny's phony pretty pink plump puffy princess pussy while he still had cum and spit on it.

Jokes aside it was enough of an interesting detail to be intriguing.

Sugar and Spice made for a great addition to the story. Everypony loves sexy, seductive twins, right? You did a great job on the back and forth chatter with those two.
I’m really interested to find out where the real Cadence has got to during all this. She’s a busy mare, she must be up to something important!
This is another very nice chapter. Please keep working on the story. And also include a hot breeding scene, please and thank you. :)

You just don't stop surprising. You did Cadance cheating on Shining, now you did Shining in a sense cheating on himself. This is fascinating and I hope to read more.

You probably did not intend this, but it would be hilarious if Wing left the siblings with an order to distract Cadance while he does something nefarious, but due to Shining's involvement the real Cadance caught him.

And yes, you should have done more with Spice's skirt. Maybe in a later chapter?