Time waits for no pony, and Rainbow Dash has accepted that with age come limitations. But experience also brings new opportunities, and as head trainer for the Wonderbolts, she’s found new passion in passing her skills on to the next generation of ace fliers.
Then, Fluttersy comes with a request. A sick filly wants to see Dash pull off her signature trick one last time. The odds are stacked against her, but Dash will do whatever it takes. She isn’t about to let anypony down.
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Cover art by MidnightSix3
Featured on Equestria Daily on Jan. 4, 2022.
Seems good so far.
I am invested in this story and am eager for more
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Awesome! I hope it lives up to your expectations.
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Excellent! I'll be posting more chapters this week.
I must say you, have the cliffhanger ending down pat. Looking great so far.
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Thank you! I've been practicing.
Then again, if that sort of magic actually could help Rainbow Dash here, then one can't help but wonder if it might be used as a basis to develop some meaningful solution for Cloudwing.
That ending, Scribble. You got me.
I had a blast with this story - thank you so much for writing this!
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You’re welcome! I had a blast writing it.
That was a wonderful story! That ending really got me in the feels!
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Glad to hear it!
Excellent work! I must say, from the first few chapters, you rather had me worried, but you pulled off a happier ending and I'm glad of it. Carry on!
Damn onion ninjas strike again!
Excellent Story!