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and what's that one condition? :o
Clopfic, Here I cum!... oh gadf I meant here I come
Great clopfic! A couple of errors here and there, but otherwise a big thumbs up!
Did rarity just fucked spike with dildo? Фу блять фу нахуй
SPAAAARITY!
insta-fav
Hmm, after reading, I like it for sure, but Spike was a little too submissive to that. Sure, it`s a pleasurable experience for men when they're used to it, but for Rarity to be like that dominant while expecting Spike to be chipper about it and even showing disappointment when he was confused about the strange request when she herself doesn't like how she ignored Spike...
'tis just a lil' off, but that's just me.
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buttsecks
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Did you enjoy the show?
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Most readers would say that it was perfect grammatically and all that jazz but really its decidedly not. Though I'm happy you enjoyed the read to oversee those mistakes!
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До
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You're so silly with your insta-favs! This was such a throw-away fic like you wouldn't believe. It was still crazy!Rarity but not from the DSP universe and so in the context of a purely oneshot story none of this really feels right. I threw in a bunch of kinks that I've found problems figuring out when or where to put them and this is probably the only ponyfic I'll publish that I don't care about thumbs down. I can say that "that's how many people feel butt hurt after reading", haha!
I'm not sure how to really feel about this story, I am an avid Sparity supporter and love it when the two have some sexual time with each other. However, I kind of have a hard time accepting Spike being so submissive towards Rarity shoving that dildo up his arse. The story isn't bad really and it does have good clop in it, but I'm really one the fence for this one. A thumbs up still since it's Sparity and it has good clop.
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See my reply to Arby in 1291605. I have no prob about how off kilter you must feel.
Oh my...
That was rather, um, unusual.
LOVED IT!
Wait a min... Carni writes fanfiction? I follow his Tumblrs but I always thought he just did art and the occasional comic.
Also, would it kill you to write Spike as the dominant and not have it be a rape fest?
1291828 no. Spike is best bitch. >:(
1291605 Mmm, I see. I totally see what you mean, and I still like this simply because it's Sparity and a lil' break from the more tragic DSP, but it's still weird seeing Spike be such a bitch to Rarity (the act, not attitude).
I absolutely cracked when you said what your alternate title and chapter name was going to be.
The dildo, that was a rather unexpected twist. It kinda irked me how Spike just submitted. I feel like he would've objected to that and punished her somehow...Other than that great job!
The only thing I really don't like about this story is that, like many one shots where Rarity turns out to be a sick slut, you forgot to give Spike a personality.
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Yup.
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Yes. It makes the whole thing very shallow. What's the whole point of bringing the dominant thing if the victim is not even going to respond by any means? No complain, no revenge, no "Holy shit, this is the real face of the girl I'm in love? Fuck no!". It just defies the propuse of making a character a sex machine if the other character is just a doll.
But everything else was great. It woul've been so much better is at least Spike gave Rarity a little pay back.
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Wholeheartedly agree and I appreciate you liking everything other than the pointlessness of this oneshot!
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A wise man named Jhon Lennon once upon a time say "The time you spended in joy, shall never be wasted", or something like that.
That was hot, but it felt that Spike barely got a word into this edge wise.
Great!
I feel butthurt, in every single sense of the expression
This is like GorisTheDeathclaw-lite. Well-written, tantalizing even, and then, out of nowhere, a dildo is shoved up your ass.
Oh Spike... I'm sorry, but it looks like Rarity's got you...
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Pegged.
Wonderful story!!!
Really happy to read a great love story between Spikey-Wikey and Rarity!
you know, i've seen a oneshot where it was about Spike and Rarity's kid and her hardships. honestly, i wish there was more, because this was a good prequel.
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...Lol wut?
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...in tha butt.
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What? No.
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Siansaar's other name is Carni. Which is exactly why I put all of his links, including his DevArt page at the end of the fic. To credit the work he did on the pic I used. Not to mention I specifically wrote
yes..I don't usually like clop involving spike, but this was..nice.
Spike got a Wut Wut in Da Butt.
Nice Clopfic, I loved it.
I WANT TO HAVE YOUR KIDS! So out of the blue but Spike likes the idea that is until he gets first go
Aww that was so romantic
, my girlfriend would never do that for me. Thumbs up.
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Rarity learned from the best.
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that is my reation to this masterpiece
>>reads description
>>sees mature rating
>>nope
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Why do you even have the mature setting on, then?
BAM! rubber dick in the ass! rarity's all like
and then 
Well, that was... different. Definitely well written, but I'm not sure of my feelings on the story. It's sexy, but not in a way I tend to enjoy.
1299503 I didn't feel like reading something like this u know with spike-rarity clop(was feeling...cloppy tho)
Da Faq i just read
great story though
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why would he do that, dark spike is best spike!!!!
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I can never unsee this now... spike with a.....
Rarity finally got someone to "bend over"
Very interesting fic and "Diamond in the Butt" gives me an idea!
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AND IM LOVING IT
... why doesn't this have rape warning? There was a clear and unmistakable rape going on
Someone could get triggered by it, plus not everyone wants to read that, especially not knowing what they're gonna stumble into.
Amusing, and thumbs-up on Spike being the catcher. While a bit more communication beforehoofs obviously would had made for a nicer, or leastways less unexpected experience for Spike, I understand the need for brevity and getting to the point, as it t'were. More worrying is Rarity's grasp on genetics, and interspecies' fertility
Though I am nonplussed why some commentators above would seem to regard this as some sort of punishment, wanting Spike to "get back" at Rarity? Huh? You do realize people of all genders have anal sex for pleasure, right? Not dominance? If not, you need to get out more....
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But isnt the picture ad-awww-oble?
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Oh, certainly. Born, or hatched, I wonder?
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Just according to keikaku