Way too much happened way too fast. Not only does it feel like we are missing at least a chapter with AJ, RD, and Pinkie, but the chapter has about 2 to 3 chapters worth of story progression jammed into one. I also couldn’t fully enjoy the lewd scenes due to it almost all being pay-off without any set-up. You have a great idea of the human passively causing an increase in libido and a decrease in inhibitions within a certain area of effect that I feel isn't being utilized to it's fullest potential.
Fully hilting herself with a particularly savage downstroke, Applejack gyrated her toned ass atop the giant. “Ya might want ta get comfy down there, Dash, Ah ain’t stoppin’ ‘til mah legs give out.”
With her forehooves resting on his broad chest, she lifted her waist, freed a portion of his length from her clinging confines, and set to riding him like a seasoned cowgirl. Her taut, lower lips were drawn out with her every upstroke, before being stuffed back in on her descents. Though she lacked the magic of a unicorn or speed of a pegasus, she put every ounce of her considerable earth pony strength into the lustful endeavor.
JUST what I was hoping for! >chef's kiss< Ç'est Magnifique!
You earned a favourite, props if I’m the ends anon some how manages to communicate and say the defeated twilight, that he wants he consent and that he thought she wanted to fuck him
Great chapter, and thankd for this awesome update
Way too much happened way too fast. Not only does it feel like we are missing at least a chapter with AJ, RD, and Pinkie, but the chapter has about 2 to 3 chapters worth of story progression jammed into one. I also couldn’t fully enjoy the lewd scenes due to it almost all being pay-off without any set-up. You have a great idea of the human passively causing an increase in libido and a decrease in inhibitions within a certain area of effect that I feel isn't being utilized to it's fullest potential.
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Small time skip between the first and second chapters
Same will happen with the third chapter
To Sunburst hooking up with both Starlight and Trixie
https://youtu.be/Vbgleeq28k4
JUST what I was hoping for! >chef's kiss< Ç'est Magnifique!
You earned a favourite, props if I’m the ends anon some how manages to communicate and say the defeated twilight, that he wants he consent and that he thought she wanted to fuck him
This is hilarious