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DerpyMuffinz


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Rainbow Dash, being famous for her great story telling, passes down the old legend of the 11:59 death train to twilight and the gang, you know, just to spook 'em, but things get a little weird when she hears the dreadful groan of the Death Train's lonely whistle. Cheating death is what she has to do to now.*TickTock* Time is running out.

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Good concept story but it felt rushed.

Well, I'm just going to say that there is little originality in this story. It's just the story of the 11:59 death train, but with different characters. It's virtually identical.

ehhh....props for trying :rainbowkiss:

It wasn't supposed to be original. It was meant to be practically the same just with different characters. I wanted to do this for the people who haven't heard the legend of the 11:59 so I wanted to keep it closest to the original story as I could. :raritycry:1284754

no es mala historia pero personalmente no me gusto

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