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I'm reading this! Can barely wait for the part when Frodo throws Sauron's cockring into the volcano. Just kidding!
Difficult to find something definite to say before it's finished. Looks good so far, (with a slight case of lavender prose but not too bad).
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You know, if all they have to do is throw the cockring into Mt Doom, they could just wait for Beorn to have a honey taco night. I'm sure it's on the menu at some point. Everybody has a taco night.
That's a solid point. It's just weird to me that there are no comments. Usually I get something popping up down here. That coupled with the decidedly mediocre rating leads me to believe folks don't like this one. Which I find interesting, because I sorta do. I usually don't like my stories. lol
What do you mean by that?
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Well, I mean that I can't promise you that there are ghosts.
But I also can't promise that there aren't ghosts.
I wouldn't worry about it too much.
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Without a clear-cut storyline to catch the readers, it's difficult to get hooked, which prevents an early upvote.
(If you want more detailed feedback I prefer PM.)
This is the first story story I've read all the way through as English is not my first language it's hard for me to read at times but this is by far one of my favorite stories on this website I'm so caught by the story 5 stats and a like from me!
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Thanks! Appreciate the comment. I don't think this is my best, but I do like this story. Glad you like it!
@tailsopony you have a way with words. this story is so incredibly fucked up yet so hot
fwiw I enjoyed the story, the setup was well worth the payoff.
this particular bit of non-con was hnnnnnnnng, the way you interleave sex with power fantasy:
the slow build up of tension, release and subversion are really well done
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Thanks! I really like that scene. Has some flaws, for sure, but definitely something I enjoy. People don't seem to like this story, but I still like it. lol. I'll probably hate the next thing I write, but people might like it. I always have this weird cycle of things...
I see chapter 4-7 as having updated in my feed, however chapters 1-3 have an added 'New' suffix. In what order should I consume this update? Any more information on what changed? EDIT: Oh I should probably have read the story description.
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Sorry, didn't mean to pop for it to register as "updated" because really it was just a formatting update with a lot of small edits from one of my pre-readers. The content is the same, but I couldn't figure out how to update it properly since it basically went from 30 some odd chapters (wtf was I thinking?) to 8.
I just don't know what went wrong!
How horrifying.
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Thanks! That's exactly what I was shooting for!
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I know!
And I love it.