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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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What did she call them again? Zap apples…? Reckon those would make some excellent special reserve cider! I oughta put it in the punch next time we have a party!

OH NO.

Over time, they’d corrupted the previously vegetarian Princess Twilight into eating meat, and by now, Flash Sentry took her to her favorite barbeque and rotisserie places every time she visited.

Princess Twilight has yet to explain to her Applejack why she's become so awkward around cattle.

All jokes aside, very strong first chapter. Looking forward to seeing the variations on the theme.

clever hint and based on it i think Applejack is next

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What did she call them again? Zap apples…? Reckon those would make some excellent special reserve cider! I oughta put it in the punch next time we have a party!

OH NO.

Oh yes! :pinkiegasp: But not to worry. All it’s getting is a mention here. Kind of a nod over to Nightmare Night.

Over time, they’d corrupted the previously vegetarian Princess Twilight into eating meat, and by now, Flash Sentry took her to her favorite barbeque and rotisserie places every time she visited.

Princess Twilight has yet to explain to her Applejack why she's become so awkward around cattle.

Or why she’s suddenly avoiding the pony Fluttershy.

All jokes aside, very strong first chapter. Looking forward to seeing the variations on the theme.

Glad you liked! I think you can guess who’s next. And I already know what variations she’ll get.

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clever hint and based on it i think Applejack is next

Thanks! She is indeed. And I already know the rough outlines her path of ascension will take.

I was honored to help, even if perhaps EqG isn't my area of expertise. Very detailed transformation scene!

nice work on both chapters out so far:twilightsmile:

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I was honored to help, even if perhaps EqG isn't my area of expertise. Very detailed transformation scene!

Thanks! Your help was welcome. You always give good feedback.

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nice work on both chapters out so far:twilightsmile:

Appreciated! :heart: I’ll try to have another chapter out around New Years.

I was hoping for some creampie with Fluttershy, but nonetheless it was very enjoyable and I look forward to next chapters :raritywink:

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I was hoping for some creampie with Fluttershy, but nonetheless it was very enjoyable and I look forward to next chapters :raritywink:

Hard to have creampie when your lover is ethereal. :raritywink: but I’ll make it a point to find ways for the girls to get it in future chapters.

You write clopfics really well. I eagerly await more of this story as well.

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I was thinking if this playlist from my Apple Music will be good for your story.

https://music.apple.com/us/playlist/mot%C3%B6rhead/pl.u-2aoqEyvt84R9bK

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You write clopfics really well. I eagerly await more of this story as well.

Thank you! :heart: You will have more, hopefully by year’s end.

Note to self: Read the update later.

even her hair ribbon had evaporated away to leave her golden locks cascading around her bare shoulders

But did her hat survive? There's losing clothing, and there's losing an intrinsic piece of herself.

Wow… who would’ve thought that TREES could climax? was the last thought she had before the bulge reached her body.

What did you think pollen was? :duck:

Ah, good, the hat lives. And another goddess rises. Now to see who's next... and whether Pinkie's going to ascend in public, which I wouldn't put past her. Talk about a once-in-a-lifetime party opportunity.

I really do not want to think that Big Mac did Applebloom.

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Then don’t. :twilightsmile: The scene was written to be deliberately vague as to what happened or would happen. So it can basically be whatever you want. I won’t expand on any of it unless I’m asked to, and even then, it would be either a bonus chapter after all the main ones are done, or a separate side story entirely.

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Note to self: Read the update later.

Look forward to hearing what you think!

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But did her hat survive? There's losing clothing, and there's losing an intrinsic piece of herself.

Agreed! That’s why I made sure she retained it. On the other hand, I just realized I never described it being set aside for safety from the undressing effect. I’ll take care of that this evening.

Wow… who would’ve thought that TREES could climax? was the last thought she had before the bulge reached her body.

What did you think pollen was? :duck:

Tree spooge! :rainbowlaugh:

Ah, good, the hat lives. And another goddess rises. Now to see who's next... and whether Pinkie's going to ascend in public, which I wouldn't put past her. Talk about a once-in-a-lifetime party opportunity.

There’s actually a question to me of who should go next. I’m currently waffling between Rarity and Pinkie Pie. I know the progression of the remainder (the last three will be RD, Sunset and Twilight in that order.)

And actually, that observation about Pinkie is part of what makes her tricky.

I love this chapter

Damn! That was extreamly hot ♡

This sure got the life juice flowing. Looking forward to the sexuell experience girls to enjoy themself next :rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::raritystarry::twilightblush:

But the most importantly question...
Will Spike grow a moustache :moustache:

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And actually, that observation about Pinkie is part of what makes her tricky.

If you're debating where Pinky should ascend, someplace like a night club might be good. Where better for the Goddess of Debauchery to ascend than in a place that's already swimming in it?

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And actually, that observation about Pinkie is part of what makes her tricky.

If you're debating where Pinky should ascend, someplace like a night club might be good. Where better for the Goddess of Debauchery to ascend than in a place that's already swimming in it?

It’s not a bad thought, but that’s ultimately up to the commissioner, who sets the ground rules and tells me what he wants with each girl. Next up by his own request is Rarity and not Pinkie Pie, so he’ll have plenty of time to decide what he wants for our favorite party girl.

Wow, such extreme ascension. Somehow I am frightened to see the result of Pinkie's ascension.

Animal and tree spirits, eh? Wonder what else are there?

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Wow, such extreme ascension. Somehow I am frightened to see the result of Pinkie's ascension.

You’ll have to wait three more chapters for that. :pinkiecrazy:

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Animal and tree spirits, eh? Wonder what else are there?

You’ll see, but I’ll just say for now it fits each character and their powers. Next chapter should be released the first weekend in February. And thank you very much for giving me like #50! :heart:

I'm not going to continue reading this since it simply doesn't appeal to me. I can't exactly say why but that is simply the case.

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I'm not going to continue reading this since it simply doesn't appeal to me. I can't exactly say why but that is simply the case.

Sorry to hear. :ajsleepy: But if it’s not your thing, it’s not your thing. Take care, and I hope to see you back on my other stories later.

nice work on chapter

Or even swim through lava!

So she has heat resistance, same as dragons.

the altered Fluttershy added her own power to her enjoyment, calling forth the spirit of a dragon to mate her from behind!

Wait, how comes there is a spirit of dragon on Earth? I don't think spirit can cross dimension from Equestria to Earth.

“Me?” the former Rarity answered distractedly as she considered the question, smiling at the answer that came immediately to mind. “I am the mistress of malachite, the sultan of sapphires, the duchess of diamonds, and the ruler of rubies. I am the master of all crystals, able to use and manipulate them to any ends I wish,” she mused as she felt the hot breath of the ethereal dragon wash over her, his tongue wrapping repeatedly around her new unicorn horn, worshiping her magical essence while his twin organs stayed embedded deep within her and his talons remained locked on her teats

. - at the end

Well... That chapter was extreamly well done :rainbowkiss:

Fun challange. Stop reading when climax is reached. Continue reading when the itch hits once more.
I got a lot out of it :yay:

ethereal energy tentacles which take the form of dragon cocks

Congratulations, I think that may be the first time anyone's put those words in that order.

By the bare body of Gaia Everfree, what is she DOING?

... so has Rarity seen that bare body? Inquiring minds want to know.
Ah, that's apparently a thing Rarity does, swearing by the first thing that pops into her head. Okay then.

Twilight then did the same for Pinkie Pie despite her objections, restoring her blouse and skirt.

Very impressive given those were exploded rather than sliced.

Heh. Poor Twilight. She really needs to stop giving her subconscious such easy setups.

And to that end, you may now call me… Crystal Queen!

She's dynamite with a laser beam? Guaranteed to blow your mind?

Quite the spectacle, and I would expect nothing less from Rarity. Though on that note... Yeah, this next one will be figuratively and literally explosive.

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nice work on chapter

Thanks!

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Or even swim through lava!

So she has heat resistance, same as dragons.

A byproduct of her crystal-controlling powers in this instance, but yes. Since lava is made of crystalline elements, she can manipulate or draw power from them.

the altered Fluttershy added her own power to her enjoyment, calling forth the spirit of a dragon to mate her from behind!

Wait, how comes there is a spirit of dragon on Earth? I don't think spirit can cross dimension from Equestria to Earth.

How do you know there weren’t once dragons on Earth, given legends of them appear in many different cultures? Even if not, if living beings can cross the portal, why not spirits?

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. - at the end

Oops. :facehoof: Fixed. Thanks for pointing out. My editing passes usually find those instances, but not always.

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Well... That chapter was extreamly well done :rainbowkiss:

Thanks for saying so! :heart:

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Fun challange. Stop reading when climax is reached. Continue reading when the itch hits once more. I got a lot out of it

I’m very glad to hear it! I rarely get to know that people enjoyed my work that much. Double-tapped while reading, huh? I did that one day while writing it!

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ethereal energy tentacles which take the form of dragon cocks

Congratulations, I think that may be the first time anyone's put those words in that order.

*takes a bow* At least nobody can ever accuse me of not being truthful in my advertising!

By the bare body of Gaia Everfree, what is she DOING?

... so has Rarity seen that bare body? Inquiring minds want to know.

A lady never tells. :raritywink: Unless she’s feeling particularly randy and showy while she and her friends play Truth or Dare...

Ah, that's apparently a thing Rarity does, swearing by the first thing that pops into her head. Okay then.

More like the first thing that popped into my head, given it was fairly hard coming up with realistic mental interjections for her. I think they more or less work, though.

Twilight then did the same for Pinkie Pie despite her objections, restoring her blouse and skirt.

Very impressive given those were exploded rather than sliced.

That’s how good her magic has gotten.

Heh. Poor Twilight. She really needs to stop giving her subconscious such easy setups.

I know, right? :ajsmug: She’ll be last to ascend, and it’s going to be real fun when it happens.

And to that end, you may now call me… Crystal Queen!

She's dynamite with a laser beam? Guaranteed to blow your mind?

Had to look up the reference, but yep. With emphasis on blow. :raritystarry:

Quite the spectacle, and I would expect nothing less from Rarity. Though on that note... Yeah, this next one will be figuratively and literally explosive.

Exactly. And her chapter is going to be tricky, to say the least. :unsuresweetie:

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It would be even amusing if their Equestria counterparts would be affected one way or another.

Great work on this chapter! I look forward on how you do the rest of the girls!

wow dude you seem to have a fetish for rarity EG x dragons

uff I like it I hope one day I can see a fic of a great dragon of flesh and blood claiming the sexy rarity of EG even being able to take his virginity XD

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It would be even amusing if their Equestria counterparts would be affected one way or another.

I agree, but that’ll have to wait for now. :twilightsmile: The commission is for the Humane 7, so they get priority in the story.

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Great work on this chapter! I look forward on how you do the rest of the girls!

Thanks again! Hope you like the next one I just released, too! :heart:

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wow dude you seem to have a fetish for rarity EG x dragons

I guess I do! :raritystarry: If you want more of that, check out Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising if you haven’t already.

uff I like it I hope one day I can see a fic of a great dragon of flesh and blood claiming the sexy rarity of EG even being able to take his virginity XD

Your wish is granted.

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Poor Twilight. Some part of her mind has a vague idea of what's going on... and she can't help but associate it with Midnight. She'll need as many friends as she can get to ease her through her apotheosis, or her anxieties may become a self-fulfilling prophecy. If a nigh-omnipotent being is convinced she'll be evil, well... :twilightoops:

In any case, not what I was expecting with Pinkie, though it makes sense that she'd want a crowd. I'm not entirely sure what her new domain might be. given how we've gone animal, vegetable, mineral... and now all and none of them at once. A deity of dimensions beyond the ones we know, perhaps? Iä! Iä! Sugar fhtagn!

Looking forward to the next installment. As pony Pinkie can attest, the key with Rainbow Dash isn't chasing her down. It's being where she's going to go.

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Poor Twilight. Some part of her mind has a vague idea of what's going on... and she can't help but associate it with Midnight. She'll need as many friends as she can get to ease her through her apotheosis, or her anxieties may become a self-fulfilling prophecy. If a nigh-omnipotent being is convinced she'll be evil, well... :twilightoops:

Congrats on calling it. :eeyup: You’re exactly right even without it being mentioned in the story yet. That’s precisely why she’s so scared of it, never mind all these other urges she’s having.

In any case, not what I was expecting with Pinkie, though it makes sense that she'd want a crowd.

This is exactly why I was having so much trouble with her. I pretty much had to feel my way through writing this until I finally hit on a theme that seemed to both work with her and fit in with the previous chapters. She’s not like her friends; she wants to be seen and wouldn’t be in the least bit afraid of nudity or anything else that happens to her here. It also helps that she’s been around the block a bit already.

I'm not entirely sure what her new domain might be. given how we've gone animal, vegetable, mineral... and now all and none of them at once. A deity of dimensions beyond the ones we know, perhaps? Iä! Iä! Sugar fhtagn!

Pretty much. Basically, she’s gained a modified form of Discord-style chaos magic coupled with an ability to read not so much minds as desires in order to make people laugh/be happy. You saw all that at the end here.

Looking forward to the next installment. As pony Pinkie can attest, the key with Rainbow Dash isn't chasing her down. It's being where she's going to go.

Yep! She’ll be tricky for different reasons. I know her goddess name and powers already, but the means of her ascension I’m still thinking about. Every chapter and Humane 7 girl gets a different source of tentacles, so what will hers be? And what role will Pinkie play? Stay tuned! If I could make this chapter work, that one should be comparatively easy... :unsuresweetie:

I’m no longer Pinkie Pie! My new name… is Sugar High!”

how is that different from the normal

“Hmph! Perfection cannot be rushed! Trixie’s Great and Powerful band needed the extra work to win this weekend’s competition!”

they need all the help they can get.:rainbowlaugh:

“What? Certainly not better than mine!” Trixie insisted.

snips and Snails are better than Trixie and the illusions

In their haste to get home, Rarity’s nude crystal statue was left behind.

soon to be a holy relic

Thst was fun, yet the others seem to hit better.

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