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This story is a sequel to Royal Twilight Inn


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I was offered a chance, to a new life, in a new world; and just as they said, it's a new chance to an entire new world.

Just that this world is indeed new, to me. No Ponies. Though they do indeed have Horses; but Horses are not Ponies, and thus useless to me.

What I find in the form of people, are Humans.

I had been promised an empty building, fit for me to establish a hotel; which is indeed true, it is where I had found myself. I made the basement, the sub-levels into my home where I established my hive. It is comfortable, underground; where any decent hive should be. Out of sight, and out of mind.

Being alone in a strange world is not my thing; so I set off, establishing the hive by laying a few eggs. I am after all the Queen of the Changelings. With my first Changelings, workers ready; I could open business and business is good. Booming, in fact. At least, by my standards.

People enter the lobby, booking suites for a night, a week, a month or til further notice.

My workers tend to them all, serving them anything and everything. The guests tip well, in the currency of a Changeling anyway; since I get all the Love I could possibly consume. And more, and more, and more..

One thing, leading to another; and before I knew it, I had established a school for little girls; a boarding-school, where they can study and learn to be Ponies. Ponies, of this world; not Equestrian Ponies, but I guess I had forgotten all about these by now.

I have everything I need, right here; and I am served, on a silver-platter (as they say). I don't need to lift a hoof, but the love just continue to stream in.

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Illustrated by: N/A
Written by: Kentavritsa
Edited by: Kentavritsa
Re-edited by: Kentavritsa
Aproved: Auto
Password: Author
Rating: Teen
Status: Incomplete
Puns: Intended
Prequel: N/A
Sequel: The Gift of a Changeling
Sequel: Mixed Identity

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 9 )

heh... she gonna grow fat on that much food

It's funny that Chrysalis is gradually transforming the city of people into Ponyville. But how did she manage to train her children to mentally be so similar to the originals so well? Does Chrysalis really know these personalities that well? Technically, apart from the main six, Chrysalis does not even know the names of the inhabitants of Ponyville.

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It should be safe to assume, she knew some of these before.
Just as Twilight would part her with information of the location and its inhabitants, in order to secure the success of the promised business; in order to secure, that Queen Chrysalis does stay in place.
Feels reasonable, she could pick up a few items on the location as well.
On the other hand, some of these details should be searchable, or by other means available to her in the new location.
Unlesss stated otherwise; the characters or people would be largely the same on both sides of the portal.
Though I could claim I am using the names for convenience to a point, largely for the relevance of the story. If I call the Fashionista anything other than Rarity; would you accept the relevance?

Changelings are adapted to fit in and play the part of a character other than themselves.

Ponyville is the location we know best. Even if we have Canterlot, Manehattan and Appaloosa available as well. On this side of the portal, it is the Human version of Canterlot. The location close to the original portal; which is also where most of the counterparts live.


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Maybe a Fat Chrysalis is the best Chrysalis?
Either way, she is most likely to stay in place if she is well fed.

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true, she likely won't cause near as much shenanigans tis time. hopefully.

maybe....

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Intrique and drama, probably, but beyond that; she has her hands and hooves quite full.

If you have followed me and my writing, you would know by now?

Ps: I think I am publishing : "First Class", rather than "Queen and CEO" next time.
Seems that would be by tomorrow.

This last chapter leaves the ending open. A note of sadness but very interesting. It's the end of an important chapter and the end of school for me only left me in a mood of relief. Unfortunately for me, learning was hard, so starting in high school I used service https://uk.edubirdie.com/assignment-writing-service for writing assignment which helped me a lot. I hope the story ends well and look forward to the sequel.

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This last chapter leaves the ending open.

I intend to publish the next instalment, once I am confident to present it.

A note of sadness but very interesting.

Sadness? why. Interesting: then I just hope I can maintain the quality.

It's the end of an important chapter and the end of school for me only left me in a mood of relief.

oh ..

Unfortunately for me, learning was hard,

Now I just wish I could have revritten the book, re-educated the teacher and made a few other changes to make it easier on you.

I hope the story ends well and look forward to the sequel.

At least, I still have more material up in the air and plans for the continuation.
Knowing my writing, I imagine there will be a sequal soon enough.

Is this story complete or not?

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Sorry, I left this story hanging.
I had one unfinished chapter.
The chapter should be published by now.
Though this story should hold numerous chapters more to come.
I intend to mark it as finished, once I have completed the story.
As the story is not finished, it will stay as incomplete.

Ps: I am working on the next chapter. I hope it will be enjoyable once it is published.

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