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I'm not the greatest writer, but specialising on short and simple stories of cute ponies from MLP:FiM and G5. Just your fan from the UK.

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It's Autumn, meaning it's the start of cider season for the Apple Family. After a successful map mission to the Peaks of Peril, Applejack invites her kirin friend to sample some of Sweet Apple Acres' finest cider. Applejack didn't expect what would happen next.

Cover Art: Autumn Blaze
Artist is by mirroredsea

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"We don't have anything like those at the Peaks!" Autumn's smile somehow grew wider. A pony, Minuette, if Applejack's memory served her correctly, leaned in and whispered in the farm-pony's ear.

I mean Minuette is the light of the party out of twilight's old friends ( which she is still in contact with them ) maybe not as hyper level as Pinkie Pie or silverstream or Gabby and certainly autumn but she's is there

On the way to Sweet Apple Acres in time for Cider Season, Applejack showed the kirin the sights of Ponyville. Occasionally they had to stop here and there as Autumn would get sidetracked, getting excited over the littlest of things, like seeing her first-ever griffon (Gallus was wanting some personal space after that encounter), to wanting to buy some prank equipment at the local joke shop, saying that this will be great for her comedy skits back home.

"Thank you for the invitation," Autumn jumped on the spot, "Now lead the way, Applejack and don't leave out any details." The two of them left the train station and Applejack began pointing out the different attractions of Ponyville, Autumn soaking in all the details. Autumn would stop from time to time when something peaked her interests, like seeing her first-ever griffon and hippogriff for the first time (Gallus and Silverstream wanting to have plenty of personal space after that), to buying some pranking equipment at the local joke shop. Autumn said that these will do great for me comedy acts back at the Peaks of Peril.

Okay just want to give you a little heads-up I felt like you said that already and it's a little mix up either that was supposed to come in when autumn arrives or something I don't know that really threw me off

"Great," Rainbow muttered, "Now there's two of them!"

"Two of who?" Pinkie and Autumn said at the same time. Rainbow face-hoofed hard.

Lol Pinkie and Autumn will get along amazingly

Ok that's actually really funny even though some of the sentence was a little mixed up as I said on my last comment but it's pretty cool to see autumn actually coming to Ponyville just to see Applejack how she does and she even give her a tour of Ponyville she even saw a lot of creatures that she never seen before and of course perfect time for apple cider season but apparently Autumn Blaze cannot handle the drink and basically she is a little tipsy 😅 this is a pretty good one probably fix the sentence I pointed out but other than that I like it keep up the good work

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Thank you for spotting. The computer froze and so got mixed up in the editing

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Oh ok I got you

"To get the proper strong stuff for me," Applejack sighed, "And I figured out what my next class at the School of Friendship is."

"What is that?" Twilight raised an eyebrow.

"Why you should never give a kirin cider," Applejack stated plainly.

Sounds like a good title for a child’s book.

She somehow managed to get out some marshmallows and began roasting them on the fire, randomly wearing what appears to be a heat-proof gear volcanologist would wear when collecting lava samples.

Courtesy of Maud, of course.

"Another perfectly good mug of cider ruined," Rainbow looked longingly at her now empty mug of evaporated cider, "Why cruel fate? Why?!"

Because it made for a good running gag, that's why. :rainbowlaugh:

"Okay, Applejack," Autumn looked back towards the orange pony, "You have to show me

This seems out of place. Especially with the abrupt end to the sentence.

moar kirin shenanigans!

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