• Member Since 8th Apr, 2012
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Mr. Grimm


Greetings! I come from the farthest reaches of the Internets to share my mediocrity with you all!

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Lyra and Bonbon meet up for lunch at noon, as they usually do. But something different happens today. An upright stallion passes by their table, drawing Lyra's attention. She has many questions for him. Who is he? Why does he walk upright? Why is he there? Unfortunately, he doesn't want to answer her. And for good reason...

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Comments ( 3 )

Nope, I don't understand what this story is all about. :applejackunsure:

Whoa... Very nice. VERY nice. There's a lot of suspense and mystery packed into this story, impressive for one just over a thousand words.

I will say that it's not technically perfect, and could do with a proofread or two from someone with a careful eye. But it wasn't frequent enough to effect the overall quality in a big way.

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I discovered an extremely obscure British myth and decided to incorporate it into MLP. Not to give too much away in the comments, but Grant's presence foretells disaster.

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