Celestia discovers that the royal pantry is out of her beloved desserts, so Luna suggests that she bakes a cake for herself. However, it turns out that doing pancakes and cakes are completely different for her. Luna decides to help, giving each other time to reminisce about their younger days and spend some quality time together.
This reminds me of another story I was reading, in which the 'disaster' was that a guy in a movie wanted to kill himself and a girl watching it acted like it's the worst thing that ever could happen. Btw, this story was funny enough to land in shelf comedy!
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Aww this is actually a really sweet story of Princess Celestia and Luna and it is so funny for Celestia have a cake craving but it's also nice to see them bonding with each other I really like that keep up the good work
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Thank you and all corrected ^^
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Very well written characterization. A simple story but quite enjoyable
Not bad
Very cute story. I like the way you decorate mundane events with colorful prose. It really elevates your fic's atmosphere. Keep it up!
You're missing a few words here.
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Thought I was just sourcing it. I didn't want others to think I was claiming the artwork as my own and others to think of it as stealing it. I draw a lot of inspiration from the artwork, and it felt right to let others see where it came from.
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Ah, right sorry. I take things too literally
That was a short, sweet, and lovely fanfic. I loved how the cake baking moment reminded the sisters of the last time both of them baked a cake together.
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