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TheLostBrony


Avid reader, amateur writer. What more is there to say?

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After rekindling their friendship, Gilda regularly visits Rainbow Dash in Ponyville. The strange thing is, she always wants to have lunch on her own, just telling Dash that she wouldn't care for her unique tastes. This time Dash curiosity gets the better of Rainbow Dash, and she decides to follow Gilda to see exactly what these 'unique tastes' are.

Contains: unwilling vore, implied digestion, and gryphons doing gryphon stuff.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 15 )

Ohhhhhkayyyy then.

I will never understand how people are into vore. I'm not against it, but I'm definitely 110% not into it.

I'm not here to read the story, nor am I here to troll (to each their own). But I want to comment on the cover art.

I notice more than Gilda in this picture. I notice Rainbow Dash's tail.

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I don't understand why a lot of people are into a lot of stuff either. But it is what it is. Plus I myself am into something no one else is (though in a very different way). Ironically, this does happen through vore a few times (hint: a very short man and a dragon).

Ending was far too abrupt for my taste, especially with so much build-up to that moment. I thought they would've had some kind of conversation about Gilda's eating habits. Maybe even turn Rainbow's opinion around to some degree, with how much she was hesitating to actually stop Gilda. Or at least have a proper vore scene.

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Thanks for the feedback. Honestly I was trying to end it on an abrupt gotcha kinda moment, but seeing this I certainly could have done more, even if it was just a conversation.

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YOLO, you should tell random strangers on a pony fanfiction site your weird fetish :rainbowlaugh:

Good stuff, well written. Thanks for sharing!

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As I said it's not a fetish, but sometimes I wonder if I'd be better off with one, for something many other people have like vore, feet, bondage, etc.

People with the weirdest fetishes will think I'm weird for this, but my interest is villains dying. I got this from watching Sailor Moon at a young age, since almost every episode ends with Sailor Moon destroying a MotW, and eventually Queen Beryl herself. Old Disney movies and The Swan Princess probably helped. MLP has it too, both G1 and G4 (though for the latter, many have attempted to convince me otherwise and take it away from me out of spite for me and my unusual interests).

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You seem like you would like Buffy the vampire Slayer then or maybe supernatural although that show kind of goes on forever

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I've seen them both, as well as Charmed, which has the highest general count.

Kinda saw the ending coming, but still this was nicely executed. Read it for the horror factor, not the fetish factor. Wish it lasted a bit longer and had a tad higher death count, but I'm satisfied with mention of past fillies, lol.

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It is done. Took me a while to get to it, but better late than never right?

I hope the other girls find out what happens and turn Gilda into a pulled chicken sandwich.

I definitely feel like this story wasted an opportunity for a more involved discussion between Gilda and Dash, or more teasing with them. Surely, Gilda would want to try to convince Dash, or have feelings for her.

I love vore, I love Gilda and I love seeing them together, I don't know if they told you before, but thanks for being born! :twilightsmile:

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