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CrimsonEquine
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CrimsonEquine
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This was great!! Love Buttoncest!!
Truly a wholesome story that warms my heart and possibly other things
Good premise.
Terrible execution.
Spelling and grammatical mistakes abound.
If this was a serious piece, 4/10.
If this was a troll piece, 11/10.
11062004
Sounds about right.
11062004
how do I fix grammar
This was painful to read because of the poor grammar.
11062822
damnit, foiled again.
Can you give me some examples of whats wrong?
That could help.
I could tolerate the poor grammar; I hardly noticed it most of the time. My issue with this story was that it felt like every other sentence was some paraphrasing of "and then they fucked and it was hot".
11062834
I’d honestly just ask someone to edit it for you, would be a lot quicker.
11063475
in fimfiction? good luck for me.
11063189 Same. Why skip the sex scenes, especially the orgies?
this feels like a troll fic
This... could have been good. It was a good idea. But instead... it just feels rushed, slapped-together, and it reads as if it were written in a drunken stupor by a drug-addicted monkey